|Reviews for Someone To Run To|
| Guest chapter 5 . 5/5
What a fantastic chapter. 'Harry' learning of her own familial identity was very well written.
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/5
Hermione is such a cow. She likes it when her supposed 'best friend' looks unkempt, w/ poorly fitting clothes, nails not done, hair a mess, etc. The one time 'Harry' looks put together, Hermione turns on her, judges her, and becomes passive-aggressive. Total cow.
| redstickbonbon chapter 22 . 5/7
No way would I ever consider asking someone to be godparent to my child after they just referred to him/her as 'that thing'. Hermione is truly an insensitive bitch here.
I think you've written these scenes really well. We've likely all known relationships that people are dead set against. My reaction, no matter who it is, once there's a kid on the way, is 'that's it, it's a done deal'. You can either support your friend/loved one, or you can continue to undermine a relationship that really has nothing to do with you. And honestly, people that choose the latter option often find themselves marginalized...it's inevitable, really.
| Katie chapter 33 . 4/29
I like your history... surtout les citations que tu inseres... so true..
But honestly there was a lot of blabla... that I was skipping a lot of part, just to know the end... I lov see how you finish Tommy boy... the ending is great... but i'm a little bit sad to see that her heritage is going to be tarnished by his great great... grandson... Nicholas banks... cela m'attriste beaucoup...
I like her relationship with sev'... it was sweet... and I agree with you, I can't picture him with another guy... all of them, they have these character s... so fierce... I don't know...
Anyway in all I like your story, this is the first time I read a history written in first person... I am just a little peeved with the way to much long with the large and unnecessary blabla... and I wish you didn't mention severus death... it was so sad 'how ely keeps shaking his shoulders, trying to wake him...' gosh
Anyway thanks gor sharing this cute story :-)
| scoug chapter 33 . 2/10
I can think of nothing else to say but this, " I truly loved this story!"
| Black Eye-Patch Pie chapter 6 . 1/27
I like the fact that you skip over events that we all know happened because you didn't change anything, it can get irritating to have to read through a re-write of Jk Rowling's version :))
| Cassandra chapter 33 . 9/6/2014
Great story. Amazing characters. Fantastic writing... There were a few spots where I would get slightly bored or wonder when and where it would all tie together but one of the best fan fictions I have ever read. Well thought out and executed. Great length and perfect character interactions. Thank you. I cannot begin to imagine how many hours were spent thinking and writing this!
Congratulations on a fantastic story! Great wrap up.. I love how you keep all of the original "novel " names except for the last! Wow. What a family...
Thank you again. Great job!
Cassandra something 163 at. Hotmail. Com.
I can never log onto my ff account
Wow... Cannot believe its over.
| an alcoholic chapter 4 . 7/18/2014
I was kind of iffy about this at first, but I like it. It's both heartbreaking and funny as fuck.
| madreader19 chapter 33 . 6/11/2014
great story even if it made me cry at the end.
will have to read more of your work.
| The AsianWeasley Twins908 chapter 33 . 4/3/2014
I must admit. I cried when Severus died and when Eleonore died. Well done. Your entire story was very well written and all the characters were very well developed. It was a little hard for me to follow exactly what was going on in your story from time to time, but asides from that, fantastic job.
| b.mars312010 chapter 33 . 3/7/2014
I know this was written a while ago but I have to say this... I absolutely LOVE this story. It is brilliant and how you have the characters grow through this story is phenomenal and very moving.
| EisForElephant chapter 14 . 8/13/2013
Really interesting read so far
| ptl4ever419 chapter 33 . 7/19/2013
I absolutely love this story and hope to find something like it in the future. Hope you keep writing.
| LaraLumos chapter 8 . 7/12/2013
You are a fantastic storyteller. I'm not a huge fan of this particular pairing to be honest, but you write it so beautifully, so in character (despite the gender-switch) that it is a joy to read. I'll be sure to add it to my community: The Best of Genderbending. The title is self-explanatory I think. :)
| Guestie chapter 33 . 6/11/2013
Three times I had tried to read the story and honestly, three times I just got to the fourth or fifth chapter, though by then I had stopped again. Honestly, this story, even though I appreciate new outlook to the femHarry fic, is not that great, I wouldn't even say it is a good romance (I just don't see the foundation of the relationship between bratty and careless HP and paedophillic wimpy SS).
BUT! obviously you had to do something right, since I eventually read the whole story (well, I may have skipped a few passages of the chapters) and I was crying by the end of the final chapter.
I still think that the most of the characters lost their significant characteristics (things that made them "them") and the way you linked the events way too simple and idealistic. Some of those, however, were sometimes written in the way I just loved (I had a music on when I read the HP and SS fisrt time, so that, for example, was simply brilliant) and for that I thank you.
You managed to butcher your way through the whole story, but you made it in attractive way, so eventually, even if someone skips a few details (in worst case the chapters), the end makes the whole suffering worth it.