Reviews for Okay
Dysgrammatophobia chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
How great. Really, it's beautiful. The only thing I'm curious about is I thought B wasn't in Wammy at the same time as the 4th gen kids. Ah well, creative liberties and all that (or I could just be wrong). Thanks for sharing.
XbuttonsX chapter 1 . 7/24/2009
Not okay. Not mediocore. :D Spellbinding. Had me holding my breath. The way you work your words ... Just amazing. Awe-inspiring, really. Poor, small, thin Mello. He needs to bulk up on his chocolate. And not die. I don't want him to die either. Great job. :D
Dlvvanzor chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
I'm very fond of the idea of Matt being skilled at watching everyone. :)
Killingmemory chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
This was good. I especially loved the part about the Whammy kids' quiet days. Nice touch.
Vera-Sama chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
A bit sad, if true. Loved it.
Deus3xMachina chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
This is one of those vignettes that just makes your heart ache... but in a relatively good way, I suppose. Very nicely written.
black laurel chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
That was...deep.

Loved the part with B.

Left me thinking, this one did...
RichelleShalark chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
I feel really dumb (maybe I just haven't gotten enough sleep) but could you possibly explain what's going on? XP I fail at life, seriously. :(
Free of Mundane Thoughts chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
And yay! Now for the review!

Obviously, utter adorableness in many various ways, (XD) and yay for Matty being observant and happyful and YAY!

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*spazzes* -Amazing how much that happens, ain't it?

and YARGH for comp keys not liking me! They always fall off... *sniff sniff*
SapphireMistress chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
wow...that waas great! nO other comment but that...

ME GIVE YOU LOADS OF REVIEW COOKIES FOR ZAT!
SkywardShadow chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
So sad. And so excellent.

Awesome work, as always.
ellan54 chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
im kinda confused...matt doesnt know his surroundings because of his video games yet he notices peoples' actions? it's a little angsty. but they are orphans so they should think about life once in a while. have you seen the movie L change the world? it tell a little about Near.
Gabriela Romero chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
Hey I liked this, although for a while I had to sit and ponder what it was really about. But it becomes clear at the end.

Impeccable writing, good job.