Reviews for A New Beginning
ES3 chapter 2 . 1/27/2010
Wonderfully done. I appreciated that you made Bella and Edward a little unsure, as I think they would have been on their honeymoon, both being virgins. I always appreciate lemony chapters that stay true to what we expect from the characters. I look forward to reading your next update!
ES3 chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
Cute! I loved the way you jumped right into the action with this. I thought the reactions of Bella's parents were spot on :-). Look forward to following this!
JandMsMommy chapter 2 . 1/22/2010
Yay! No fade to black sexy time scene! haha I love when people write Bella and Edward's first time. It's so satisfying after not getting it in BD.:D

Anyway, I loved how you wrote the worry and anxiety when someone is losing their virginity. It was very honest and real. Great job!:)

JandMsMommy chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
Hi there! I saw your story listed on the Review for Review thread over at Twilighted and thought I'd check it out.:)

I really like your take on the wedding. It was refreshing to see a different version of it.

Edward was a sweetie as usual, and Bella was just as awkward as you'd expect her to be.:)

It was very well written, and I'll be on to the next chapter!

I hope you check out my story, Bedroom Confessions, in return!

There's only 3 chapters so far, so it will be easy to get through. Thanks!:)

dixierose21 chapter 12 . 1/8/2010
alright.. blonde chick is definitely a vamp, i'm just not sure which one.

and by the way there are two forms of the word here/hear... there's HERE as in "It's about time that you got HERE" .. and then there's "I HEAR Johnny calling me from down the hallway"... just thought i'd point that out cause you used the wrong form twice haha. ANYWHO...

update again soon :)
Lacy-Jane chapter 11 . 12/18/2009
Excellent chapter. Your version of the wedding was so much better than Breaking Dawn!
xxxlookingformyedwardxxx chapter 10 . 12/10/2009
love it cant wait for more!
anna42hmr chapter 10 . 9/27/2009
great story looking forward to more
Lacy-Jane chapter 10 . 9/27/2009
Great chapter. I thought Alice's reaction was cute!
citychick chapter 10 . 9/26/2009
Good Chapter. Would have been better if was longer. Looking forward to reading Rosalie's reaction.

Looking forward to the next update.
Tanyab423 chapter 10 . 9/26/2009
LOVED it! but i want more lol... great job so far
amhatfie chapter 10 . 9/26/2009
This is a very good story so far. Can't wait for another update. I just hope Rosalie gets over this since it is so different from BD. Bella doesn't need her to protect the baby. I will be anxiously awaiting more of this awesome story.
amhatfie chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
Wow! Now this is the way to start out a story. This was a very incredibly hot chapter. I can't wait to read more. (and not just the lemons) Great job.
MaryV121 chapter 10 . 9/26/2009
I'm so excited. :-) I hope everything goes well with the baby and Bella.
elb02 chapter 9 . 9/15/2009
cute! I look forward to another chapter :)
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