Reviews for On The Outside
Chris B. Bacon chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
For about the first half of this, I thought you had Ororo doing..."personal things" that should not be mentioned in polite conversation! I checked the rating, and thought for a moment that I was reading softcore porn! Thank God she's just tending to her her garden, and not...well, "tending to her garden".
Larisa chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
I love this story!

Thank you
Guest chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
This is a nice story. It would be interesting to read what Laura's thoughts are abot this, or if she comes back. Could you take this story anywhere? Great job.
Alastor Vega chapter 1 . 2/10/2009
Nice story. I always wanted to read a Storm and X interaction story. She be a perfect mother figure in my opinion.
allyg1990 chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
Aww, that was sweet. I think you portrayed X23's character perfectly, same with Storm's. Great job!