Reviews for Trouble, calls for HELP!
Guest chapter 3 . 7/17/2013
So many plot holes i'll point out two to you first why don't they wish for the volturi to leave them alone and not sparkle and second why doesn't alicia wish for her second power and finally alicia's power is really stupid she can get any power she wants if she wishes for it plus you got rid of the most notice able features about vampires pale skin which they need to sparkle and eyes and bloodlust its really easy to hide that since in forks it rains almost all the time these characters are so overated and I don't get the confusion in love part because once vampires are mated there is no such thing as someone else in there life you really need to rewrite or delete this
teamedward6011 chapter 35 . 5/5/2013
OMG I knew I knew they would not hurt them I can not wait to you update again please update soon.!
teamedward6011 chapter 33 . 3/14/2013
look at bella puting her foot down I love it can't wait til next update!
teamedward6011 chapter 32 . 3/10/2013
OMT! What is going to happen to everyone Please Update Soon!
R chapter 22 . 3/5/2013
Hate it
teamedward6011 chapter 30 . 3/4/2013
It was good So rob want to marry Alicia Wow can't wait to see what happens update soon!
teamedward6011 chapter 28 . 2/9/2013
great chapter! please update!
MissAlli chapter 27 . 2/5/2013
Ohhhhh suspence ! Lol you know I keep picturing the girls to look like little mix :) oh initiated what you did with there boyfriends names lol :)
Great story, though there powers are a little unrealistic I love there uniqueness and there personalitys if they weren't cool peppy and outgoing it would have been weird to seem them so powerfull, I think it goes well with the fact that they are one of a kind, or whatever you call it, they sort of remind me a little of dhampiers in vampire academy ( if you've read that )
Hmmm I wish for you to update
Ali "granted"
Amazing story I can't wait to read more !
Xx Alice
teamedward6011 chapter 29 . 2/3/2013
I think the store is good just need steady update a it would be great Keep it coming! Update Please!
TigerDiva10 chapter 3 . 2/2/2013
eh.
Commander Ael chapter 5 . 12/23/2009
Nice.
pintsizedjellybean chapter 25 . 12/18/2009
this chapter was reli cute and worth the wait!

cant wait to read nxt chapter!
RangaHotMrsBlondDR chapter 24 . 11/24/2009
i love it plase update ASAP it's really ausume so far :-)
xSomeDelicateFlowerx chapter 23 . 11/18/2009
no no

you just ruined it for me

you should write a bit of spoilers in the chap. title

I am going to see the movie this friday

and you you kinda told me what to expect

so unfair

btw I'm so if i seem like an awful person

also your story is great

I thought edward was going to leave bella for alicia

which is why i didnt want to read it anymore
AnNaLeE m O'bRiEn chapter 22 . 11/3/2009
OMG OMG Update Update Update ASAP I Love your story
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