Reviews for Pieces: Holding On
DeArtist chapter 1 . 3/6/2010
I thoroughly enjoyed your story; however I wish that there was more. I have but one suggestion, try another point of view. I would like to read more from you and I also liked your idea of making them a potential couple. You have caused inspiration.

DeArtist
gracefulraven chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
I really enjoyed reading your story. I can actually see them as a couple now after reading this. I wish that you would continue this story; however, I have one suggestion for you. I think that a third person's point of view would be better than a second person's point of view.
downtownsasquatch chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
I really enjoyed this. Great job :)