Reviews for Prince On A White Horse
Lafemmevegeta chapter 40 . 12/9/2017
I was enjoying this story even with the typos. Then it jumped a full four years without any type of life event before or after. ends abruptly with an assault and a kiss. Why would y9u shorten the lifespan of the fic like that? This had true potential and it just got silenced with an abrupt period because I assume you were bored with the story. Sigh!
mitelea chapter 2 . 8/20/2015
How old is bella
Guest chapter 17 . 5/28/2015
awww theyr so sweet. but why did make this bella so young. if shes 16 it would be perfect for her to have a boyfriend. cant imagine her just a kid 14 with foul mouth
Guest chapter 1 . 5/5/2014
That was funny that Bella pierced her toung without permission yet wanted her mom to ask her about moving to the u.s
Ema chapter 40 . 5/2/2013
Nice story really loved it
jess 'twilight matrix chapter 40 . 1/4/2013
I loved this story! It was really good. I was so sad when Carlisle died. I seriously wanted to stop reading...I have NEVER read a story where Carlisle was a shocked but I'm really glad I kept ready. And the epilogue wasn't what I was expecting but I still liked it. Great job! :)
Guest chapter 40 . 12/20/2012
Please continue PLEASE! this story is awesome
cutieheart365 chapter 40 . 5/22/2012
Really liked this story , it was different from any other story I've read! :)
Katoo chapter 36 . 3/28/2012
I was crying my eyes out about Carlisle's death. I used to not really care about ppl dying in fanfiction stories. but a while back my grandma died and now I tear up everytime somebody dies haha.

I would have lied it more I think if they were 16 - 18 years old, but I'm starting to get okay with that little fact :p

Good story (:
tracylynne chapter 40 . 2/24/2012
Absolutely Wonderful!
Guest chapter 3 . 11/15/2011
this is exactly like the book scarlett by cathy cassidy
zeina1 chapter 40 . 8/13/2011
eatalpaulaa chapter 40 . 3/11/2011
fact you hava a brazilian fan *o*

fanfiction that was just perfect, no more words

congratulations, you write really well

whereiselvis chapter 27 . 12/24/2010
Please tell me that there will be a character death: Jessica.
whereiselvis chapter 22 . 12/24/2010
Wow, did you say that you're only 14? Bloody brilliant writing for any age!
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