Reviews for Disruption
kanedasajfar chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
Very nice descriptions for combats! Very "game-like" in many aspects, very faithful to the same feeling I had playing for endless hours. :) One thing though, is the coarse language you use sometimes. Kinda took me out of the "game" atmosphere. I played Freelancer a lot, and I don't remember any harsh language at any moment of the story. Maybe you should have stick to that, but then again, your story is very good and I think coarse words felt natural at the moment of writing. I must admit... I many times cursed those damn rogues pretty often. :P