Reviews for Pain in the heart
JeanBeckett chapter 6 . 9/16/2011

I just finished your story and I really love it. I hope there'll be an update soon. I'm really impatient to know what is going to happen.

This is a great story.

Have a good day.
Anigen chapter 6 . 1/16/2010
yay luke is mina's mate
Lady Khazaroth Mur chapter 6 . 5/10/2009


Some very nice ideas in here, especialy the whole thing about mates and Zeus.

Keep it up!
1Angel Fallen chapter 5 . 3/15/2009
another great update.

Poor luke. I hope they find mina soon.

I cant wait for more
HLCurbishley chapter 5 . 3/15/2009
another amazing chapter you are just fab at writing to you know that can't wait for the next chapter if you have time read my twilight/demon cross-over story Bella and Luke's Love Story thanks and keep up the fab work
HLCurbishley chapter 2 . 3/13/2009
amazing I love your story and I love Demons please if you have five read my story Bella and Luke's Love Story a twilight/Demons cross-over thanks and keep up the good work
1Angel Fallen chapter 4 . 2/17/2009
Great Update.

I cant wait for the next chapter
Hallow Avengence chapter 4 . 2/16/2009
This is great, really IC!

Only point - you might want to proof read it, there are quite a few spelling and punctuation mistakes, but still good. XD
calathiel94 chapter 3 . 2/8/2009
Nice update, can't wait for the next!
EnglishFitzPercy chapter 3 . 2/8/2009
Yay! Another great chapter, please keep them coming :)
1Angel Fallen chapter 3 . 2/8/2009
I want to know who has Mina and how they know that she a vampire?

Great third chapter. Poor luke feeling gulity.

I cant wait for more
1Angel Fallen chapter 2 . 2/4/2009
Great second chapter.

you have me intrigued.

i hope you update soon
EnglishFitzPercy chapter 2 . 2/4/2009
Awesome chapter, keep it up!
calathiel94 chapter 2 . 2/3/2009
Nice update, looking forward to the next! Have you considered getting a beta to look over this? Again, nice work ]
calathiel94 chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
Interesting start, please update soon!
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