Reviews for Wedding Vows of Romeo and Juliet
ff chapter 1 . 4/30
nice
Guest chapter 1 . 10/2/2014
lol
Guest chapter 1 . 4/10/2014
I swear I have loved you since we first met.
The shine in your eyes will never grow old.
Deceiving my parents I don’t regret.
For in love we’ll be till we both go cold.
Rosaline? Why I’ve forgotten the name.
My foolish ways are done, To you I’m true
Our love ignites like a fiery flame,
Engulfed in darkness, until I see you.
Our parents quarrel does not stand a chance,
As long as you and I are together.
The strength of our everlasting romance,
is more powerful than that of weather.
Here in Verona, I’ve asked for your hand,
And now our future starts, free and unplanned.
Anthony chapter 1 . 4/25/2013
really good! helped me a super lot, totally not gay! i used this for my wedding.:) my wife loved it! and all the guest did too! (i mean did you;) ) you are like my super hero for writing this! keep up the good work 'dawg.'- try using that word in something you write!

Sincerely,
Anthony
JNSx7 chapter 1 . 10/31/2012
Amazing.
Karyukai chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
This is beautiful. I wish modern wedding vows carried this kind of sweetness. You've captured the style of the play wonderfully and I love the imagery.

Thank you for sharing.
jenn chapter 1 . 2/15/2004
this is really great! i would have never came up with this on my own! great job whomever wrote it!
mlp chapter 1 . 12/6/2001
Great poem!
MoshiMoshiQueen chapter 1 . 12/5/2001
it was deep and very nice it had very good wording!