|Reviews for Mongoloid|
| Aquatic-Idealist chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
I can't believe this hasn't been reviewed yet. The pacing just jumps suddenly, without any warning. Perhaps you should put a divider between the last paragraph and the rest of the tale? Still, it was quite well done. I enjoyed your view of the Androsynth mindset and their sorrows.
Perhaps the only reason why it hasn't been reviewed is due to your explanation of why "I think each of us aboard ship knew deep down in our hearts...that the Androsynth had damn good reasons for hating us."
Calling it 'slavery' almost sounds like dismissing it as something simple. Well done, sir!