Reviews for Icy Eyes
Crystal Dragon's blood chapter 2 . 7/26/2014
A. good plot but the typos got old.
B. this is not a rated M worthy fic.
C. you brought star and laddie in for a bit but never said what happened to them
Standard Nerds chapter 1 . 4/3/2010
Yay! This person shares my name... sort of...


Zina :)
dimensioner chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
Your story is interesting, but you have a problem spelling things right, which make it hard to read. I suggest you get your story looked over, and I'll gladly read it one more time, but for now, since english is only my second language, it's really too difficult to read.
Superdani4Ever chapter 2 . 5/9/2009

TheLostGirl91 chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
This story is awesome!

Please update soon. :)
ThexHushxSound chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
It's a good plot line. Lot of grammer errors tho. You should see if you can get a beta for your story, or proofread it a couple more times before you post. Other than that it's really good.
LostInPurgatory chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
Hey you have a good story going, but you alson have A LOT of spelling errors. I am not trying to come off bad because I can't spell to well either. Just re-read your story(s) before you post them or maybe get a beta to possibly help you out on that sort of thing.
Moonlover97 chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
not a bad story, could do with a beta though.