Reviews for Aoi
A Guy chapter 12 . 12/10/2020
Interesting conclusion. A nice read. There were some odd skips where certain things were offhandedly mentioned or needed to be assumed by the reader, and the pacing near the end was a little fast. One person I heard suggested that Shinji could have come back and witnessed all of the pain caused by his absence, and I think that would have been an interesting alternate ending.

7/10 possessed Shinjis and a trashed SDAT
Brool Story Co chapter 12 . 6/10/2020
Jesus Fucking Christ what did I just read. So well written. So depressing.
Deltajoshua12 chapter 12 . 5/22/2020
I like how this story was and I know you state that the story is done but I would love for you return and finish this interesting story but since this story is dead I can only hope.
Dragonjek chapter 12 . 1/11/2019
Shinji getting a body back and somehow gaining consciousness as himself would have been the absolute most painful thing to tack onto the end of this-him waking up only to see what his death has done, and other people being so fucked up by the resulting consequences that followed it that him being alive again only makes them suffer more.
creativesm75 chapter 12 . 1/3/2019
very good
aegisZero chapter 12 . 3/16/2016
It was fantastic.
Traitor of All Traitors chapter 12 . 1/28/2016
No sequel? No telling what happens next?
COBRASTEVE chapter 1 . 11/12/2015
I've only rear CH 1 but I was so disturbed I cheated and scanned CH 12. I really don't know if I can read the rest. I'll have to think on this first.
The Cruel chapter 12 . 8/28/2014
This fanfic is a nice "What if" scenario here. And at last, they were all fucked. About Asuka, since one specific one-shot, I never thought about her, cutting her hair. Asuka with short Hair is so unimaginable for me, and becoming a operations director also. Portraing Maya as a backstabing bitch is the most ironic thing of all. She was just scared.
John Spangler chapter 1 . 7/13/2014
I didn't think that a fanfiction could be darker than the original, but your story really shocked me. It's so wonderfully tragic that...hell, I can't find the words. However, great job!
Stepford Smiler chapter 12 . 7/8/2014
This is the closest I've been to crying in YEARS this is well written but Oh GOD you utter, utter ...
NarwhalWarlord chapter 12 . 2/15/2014



Good stuff. Questions though:

1. How did Mana get the Trident down there?

2. Where was the Commander's AT Field? Manga sources show that he has one, and Original never contradicts it. I accept his death for narrative purposes, but wouldn't he put up more of a fight?

I like the ending, mired in utter despair and misery. Nice going with that.
ChaddyManPrime chapter 1 . 2/4/2014
This more depressing than Obsession bro
GodzillaFollower1998 chapter 12 . 11/22/2013
There is only one thing that comes to mind when I read this overly depressing story: 'One life can change the course of many.'

And this proves just that, Shinji really was the life that kept the darkness of this blank world at bay from the others, that and helped them with their own insecurities. He was a catalyst, and with out him...

Things fall apart...
MAI742 chapter 10 . 11/19/2013
I found myself re-reading this one as something to do when suffering from insomnia.

Thinking back on this story, I would have preferred less angst-milking in favour of it being more, I dunno. Nuanced?

But this flamboyantly melodramatic tale is something you should be proud of. It's been a deliciously depressing delight to consume (again), and I thank you for having written it.
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