|Reviews for Lost in the Rain|
| KameoDash chapter 22 . 3/4
This is easily one of my favourite multi-chapter NaruSaku story. It's really interesting and I'm enjoying it so far. You can take your time. I understand that you're busy and have more important stuff to do. We can wait. :D
| dylandemon999 chapter 22 . 2/9
this chapter was great this is one of my favorite naruXsaku stories keep up the great work
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/13/2013
Pleaseeeeee continue this please , please greatest story iie ever read
| IronClawedDemon chapter 20 . 12/13/2013
I would personally would love to read a bleach story from you you've got a knack for writin stories bud I like this one here but I personally like a lil romance and lemon (just so ya know *wink)
| Life and Death Light and Dark chapter 5 . 10/14/2013
Your stories are amazing
| deeutza0079 chapter 22 . 9/30/2013
Hi there... I wanted to say that: I LOVE YOUR STORY! The love between Naruto and Sakura has developed very interesting...just like it should! I like how you describe the fighting scenes and it's a good thing that you respect the personality of the characters! Any way in one word: AMAZING! I wait for the next chapters! :D
| meerastark chapter 22 . 9/18/2013
I love this story!
| lovelyleveret chapter 22 . 9/17/2013
Hi :D OMG. Do you have any idea how awesome your story is? I couldn't stop reading at all to leave a review for each chapter! So I'll make this one review worth it all :D
This is seriously one of the best I have ever read in the Naruto fanfiction archive especially with a NaruSaku pairing. I don't mind Naruto being Sasuke like at the first parts. :D I enjoyed it at the fact that Sakura was able to pull him out of pushing himself away from the people who cares about him. :) It made their character and relationship development even better here :) I also love the pace of the development of the story.
I was caught offguard by a lot of things while I read. I never actually expected Sakura's parents to be killed. I was absolutely shocked when I read that part. One moment everything is okay and then something absolutely terrible happens and I am just too shocked for words. At first I thought it was Sasuke who slipped the note for Naruto and Sakura but it turns out to be Izanami. :O
I also enjoy reading Sasuke's thoughts about Naruto and Sakura and how he still actually cares for them even if he is kind of in denial of it all. :)) I enjoy the relationship between Kakashi and Naruto and Sakura and how much they feel like a real family and adding Kaori just tops it off. :D
This is real high quality reading and I am going to share this story in my tumblr so that more people will enjoy this story :D You are a great author! really wrote this story amazingly and I am excited on what will happen next. :D
| Guest chapter 22 . 9/16/2013
I love this story. I hope you update soon!
| ty7769 chapter 22 . 9/8/2013
Can't wait for the next chapter
| Materia-Blade chapter 22 . 9/8/2013
I have a few little pet peeves with this fic but other than that I want to start off by saying your writing is spectacular. You really make Amegakure feel 'real' in a way I have never seen before. Simple comments on how the Rains have died down since Pein died and your descriptions of the village really flesh out the setting.
That said, you have a fricking army of OC's. Some you make very well. Samanji, Izanami, and Chisoku were great. I loved reading about them. Their characters are fleshed out and marvelously well done. Enjoyable to read and everything! Some are... very much throwaway characters. Naito in particular, irritated me with every second of screen time he got. To a lesser extent Kaori seemed very bland and cardboardy. That and her whole sideplot with her brother just seemed straight up unbelievable. Koharu? Was that her name? Chick who randomly slapped Sakura over a boy she didn't know and as of yet has never actually even spoken to in the entire fic seemed extremely... well. Retarded. _ Do people really act like that? I've never seen it but I'm a country boy. Chihiro, who you introduced as Sakura's assistant multiple times only to have her pretty much bite it without any main characters having even noticed yet is kinda sad.
I'd also like to comment on the logistics of the whole plot, and also how you pretty much abandoned the original reason for Naru/Saku to be in Ame in the first place. It just seems unusual for the Kage of another village to not only let Konoha know that they had string of murders they couldn't handle or figure out, but to actually ask for 'help.' It just seems... really really stupid from an administrative standpoint. They want to appear strong so clients will hire them and all.
Also there is no mention of who was killed before. If Ame is so desperate to stop these murders I feel that there should at least be a nod to those who died before Ame needed to ask Konoha for help.
Okay, whew. Now that I'm done with all the bad stuff.
Sakura and Naruto. Holy god I have never in all my life seen better and more wonderfully nuanced portrayals of the two. The romance is... is... perfect. Like, holy god, this is so fucking awesome. Slow and tantalizing, the writing is beautiful. I love every second of character development you have between these two.
Kakashi, Kyuubi, Sasuke, Tsunade, and all regular cast are almost perfectly written. I honestly don't think I have a single complaint about any of your characters from the canon cast being OOC. They are written absolutely perfectly. An incredible achievement, soiled only by your unparallelled ability to write romance.
I want another 20 chapters. Stat.
| unknow98 chapter 22 . 8/17/2013
please do write another soon
| Exxcaliburr chapter 22 . 7/11/2013
Wow..Ive read this so many times now and i still cant get enough.
Just wondering, will this get updated?
| LimitedEternity chapter 22 . 7/3/2013
I totally knew that bitch Akane was Shuhan! And I'm still sad Sakura feel for that little rustling trick *sigh* but I'm really hoping Akane and Samanji don't take her! I want to see an epic knockdown dragged out battle between Akane and Naruto! Or someone else... But great job! Will Sakura get to use her new jutsu soon? Or replenish her chakra with water? That would be kinda funny... Captured, weak, and then they leave a puddle in your holding cell and therefore chakra... Ha.
| Exxcaliburr chapter 18 . 3/23/2013
hahaha loved it