I know it’s been years, but can you please consider finishing the story. It is such a good story and I want to know the end. You are a wonderful writer! I have read the posted part more than once.

And I'm here, now, wondering why I started reading this amazing fic even tho I knew it was unfinished. Because now I need more. Really. It's painful to know I won't be able to read about Jasper's family visit or Alice's past. It's only been 15 years, it's not too late to publish another chapter. (I just know I'll end up thinking about writing a fanfiction for this fanfiction).

Reaaaaally? Omg, is can't believe that I start to read knowing that it wasn't finished
That's the best Alice and Jasper story I've ever read
Please come back, it's not to late to finish!
It's so beautiful, sad, intense, perfect

I loved so much

Ahhh so many year later! I thought of this fic tonight for some reason, searched and searched because I couldn’t remember the name. I haven’t even read FF in about 10 years! I just remember feeling so desperate for the next chapter of this fic. I hope one day you can complete it!

Loved this

I cannot believe this isn't finished! It's seriously AMAZING! I truly HOPE that you'll come back and finish this story sometime...

Are you telling me, that you never finished this? PLEASE FINISH THIS IT'S AMAZING

I know I'm 10 years late, but wow, this is a masterpiece, especially this chapter. Wow.

Hi there!

I am not sure if you are still active here or not. I just wanted to say, that I first discovered this fanfic about 6 years ago when I was about 15 y/old. I stumbled upon it today after looking at some of my favorited stories - I have not been on this page for years. And I have to say I still love this story just as much as I did then, which says a lot, cause obviously I have changed a lot as a person.
However reading your story randomly until 2 am toight reminded me how was such a big part of my life and how your story is just so incredibly written, I absolutely love it still!
So thank you for writing it!

Happy holidays :)

Veronika

I just finally got around to reading this story. Good stuff! I hope you do finish it someday! You do a great job showing the massive chaos involved when one lives through a significant trauma. It is like your life has shattered into a zillion pieces of crystal, and now you need to try to reassemble it. Some of the pieces are unexpectedly sharp when you pick them up. Others seem to be different shapes/colors. And no matter how you try, it will never be as it was before. Which doesn't mean that some parts aren't, in fact, better. But the whole is different.

And bless you for not using the phrase "the new normal". Suffice to say, I experience rather anti-social urges when I hear it. Ugh.

Thanks so much for sharing this fic with us. I know it has been years, but if you are ever so inclined to finish it, that will be terrific!

So...where do I start? Your style of writing is incredible. I enjoyed reading this very much, especially because of all those detailed descriptions and metaphors and stuff. The chapters had an adequate length and the switching between the POVs was very varied. Sometimes, when you changed the format in some chapter, it was a bit confusing to read, but, on the other hand, also quite interesting.
I liked all those references to the "real" Alice & Jasper (e.g. Alice predicting the weather with her hip, or, of course, Jasper's scars).
The plot was okay. I mean, it's, of course, that typical love story plot between two broken people that need each other in order to be saved. And you kind of managed to make it interesting enough to keep me reading. The relationship between the two developed slowly and comprehensibly. Nothing was rushed (although it kind of would have been better sometimes if it was) and in the end, I liked them as a couple. Nevertheless, I have to say that some conflicts between them weren't that comprehensible and, I guess, just for drama's sake, which I never approve of. But that's just the way it is with these love stories, right?
Anyway, I need to say that your story (or stories, ' cause I've read 'em all!) is/are the bright spot on this website and I want to thank you for sharing this. Needless to say that it's a pity that this isn't finished (especially when there's a conflict in chapter 23 which needs to be solved) and probably won't be, but nevertheless, it was worth reading. Chapeau!
Best wishes from Germany. :)

Ah shit. Why did I start reading this. It ended at the worst part. I think we were beginning to get Alice's story started about who she is.

Please find it in yourself to complete this fic, just stumbled upon it earlier today and could not keep it down till I finished.

Your writing is awesome and the subtle hints, like Charlie being Jasper's uncle, make the plot infinitely more interesting

Going against all odds for closure