Reviews for Tie Me Down to this World
Skylar87 chapter 23 . 9/17/2010
Please upate soon!

girl-crazy-4-VampyreSpeed chapter 23 . 9/9/2010
OMG! Please please please update soon!

This is officially my new favourite story of all time and I need an update!

Please because now I really want to know what happens next and I want to know whether Alice ever meets Edward and u really want her and Jasper to be happy again! I love the sadness and tragedy in the story but I do really want a happy ending too!

I think bat yo idea is really original and cool and so hag us yet another reason why I want you to update! Because there is no other story like this!



PS- Don't forget to update!
quoideneufj chapter 23 . 9/9/2010
Please, I hope everything is alright, if at all possible, please finish this story, but even if you don't or can't, just know that it rocks - it's beautifully written and conceptualised. Thank you so much for sharing.
quoideneufj chapter 17 . 9/9/2010
wow... this story is just simply amazingly well written... please, if you are out there, please finish it.
lipstickletter chapter 23 . 8/24/2010
Why do so many amazing author's leave such amazing cliffhangers and never finish their stories? if you are having writer's block, I'll find you a cure! I am going to die of anticipation. Just read this story last night and couldn't stop. I NEVER review stories, always story alert them, but I can't help myself here. Too good to go to waste.
Aunda chapter 23 . 8/18/2010
Beautiful and wonderful story! :D
dbn1 chapter 23 . 8/16/2010
You know - I was just re-reading this story. And it reminded how much I simply love this and also how much I missed it.

I just really hope that one day you come back to this story and starts writing again.
bibliophiliac chapter 23 . 7/29/2010
Hi, I wanted to leave a review because I put you on author alert and I hate to do that without giving some feedback. (This is my first review because I've just discovered this story and have been reading it feverishly since the first chapter).

I can honestly say that this is a great story (not just a great fanfic story, which it is as well). Alice, Jasper, and later, Emmett, are so clearly drawn that even if I have no idea what they will do next, every action they take just seems a logical and internally consistent reflection of their character. I also love the fact that you haven't rushed the pacing. Alice and Jasper have a complicated relationship that you've taken time to develop, and explore how shifts in their relationship send ripples (or tears) into their own psyches.

Finally, your language and style choices have been really creative and well-executed. I feel like I need to stop, because I'm gushing, but this has been a huge pleasure to read. Thanks so much. I know the story is on indefinite hiatus, so I will just say that I hope your life is treating you well :)

Thanks again!
Nalati chapter 23 . 7/27/2010
First of all, I want to thank you for everything you've written so far; incomplete or not, the seven hours I spent reading your story last night were a joy, and regardless of whether or not you ever finish, the story is excellent and I expect to read it all again.

Of course, I sincerely hope that you DO still plan to finish and intend to spend the rest of this review dropping not-so-subtle hints on the subject ;p

There are a lot of things about this story I like, and a few that I love. Jasper and Alice, of course, fall into the latter category. They are exactly the same characters I loved before I started reading, only with a new angle and depth that makes them new all over again. I feel for Jasper, with his permanent scars, and for all his gruff rudeness and excessive bad language, I don't think I've ever loved him more than when he declared that Alice was moving in with him and away from that unsafe neighbourhood. I'm not sure why it was that moment, more than any other, but it was. Similarly, I don't know why Alice's artwork is the one element of her character that lingers most in my mind, but it does. I like how she's afraid of cars and slowly learning to love shopping. I'm less fond of how she's closing herself off and giving up hope right now, but that, of course, is to be expected, and I'm sure she'll pick herself up - eventually.

More generally speaking, I like how you've paralleled their original vampiric story with such things as Alice sort-of knowing his face before he knows hers and their meeting in a restraunt on a rainy day, as well as weaving Peter, Charlotte and Maria into Jasper's past in just the same way as they were in his vampire life (as well as James being the indirect cause of Alice's trauma, if I'm guessing right and it was him in the flashback?). I like how you've left tiny, watered-down hints of their gifts with Alice's knack for winning bets and Jasper feeling out moods - and Edward's mind-reading, for that matter; I have a feeling that if she'd remembered that day in full, her brother would have protested that he hadn't read hadn't read her diary at all. I hope so.

On that point, I might as well mention now I'm itching to see Alice find her family - or for Jasper to find them for her. I'm assuming Bella is going to play a part, being the best friend that memory-Alice said her brother was proposing too, and I'm also curious as to how Carlisle and Esme are going to fit in, if they're going to turn up at all. For a while I thought they would be Jasper's parents, actually, but now that said parents have names (and personalities) that don't fit, then I suppose that if Alice and Edward were adopted, it makes more sense in terms of characterisation that they belong to the currently-absent half of the family. That is assuming, again, that you plan to include everyone and that Rosalie and Emmett weren't exceptions. I'm quite sure you're going to include Edward as a character rather than just a memory, considering how often he's been mentioned so far, though I'm with Jasper - where IS he? Given the convoluted travel plans Alice apprently had before her accident, I'm guessing that he is a devoted brother who just doesn't have a clue where to look, but knowing Jasper, that's probably not going to be enough to save Edward from getting a broken nose, too. Is it cruel of me to hope to see that? Call me a fangirl, but Jasper being protective of Alice is one of his most endearing features, even if it involved uncalled-for violence.

While I'm rambling on the subject of families, let me say that I like your Emmett. Emmett here is charmingly himself in every way that counts; I can see why your other readers were so eager for him to turn up, and I look forward to more of him. As much as it was good for Jasper to see him again, I think it was equally good for Alice; his text messages are just as endearing. Also, I'm absurdly happily for Rosalie in this story, just because she has her curly-haired baby boy. She's very likable, moreso because you've given us hints of her childhood with Jasper.

Changing the subject completely... You often warn for odd formatting; I don't think you need to worry. Most of the time, it doesn't boter me in the slightest. There have only been two times when I was confused by formatting - one was the chapter in which you had all dialogue marked either with italics or normal in a paragraph of italics, but with no quotation marks. That was confusing, and irritating in that I kept feeling like they were thinking the words, not saying them. The other time was in chapter fifteen, when Alice's narrative was full of dashes; the sentences seemed to be missing words, making it hard to follow, so I wasn't sure if the dashes indicated that something was skipped or were punctuating the sentence normally. That was also confusing. The sections where you have stylistic all-lower-case and italicised narration that skips punctuation marks makes me uncomfortable, but that's more because I'm an editor who is paid to fix such things than because I didn't understand. In fact, it made the mood much stronger, so I wouldn't change it; just wanted to mention it.

And... I think that's all I have to say. For now. I'll probably remember another ten things I wanted to mention five seconds after I've submitted this, but these are probably all the major points. In an case the only really important part is this:

This is an excellent story, and thank you, THANK you for writing everything so far. I hope to see more, but regardless, you've made my day. Thank you.
Harlequin99 chapter 23 . 7/26/2010
I really enjoyed reading this story, please update soon :)
omgyou'resohot chapter 23 . 7/24/2010
Hey, I guess it's pretty stupid to say that I like your fic 'cause it's not true... I simply LOVE IT I mean I like some fic here and there but your's is absolutly... awesome? I don't know even how to describe it!

Just please consider the idea of writing some more I know that it's easy to ask (write) things and no give almost nothing(us) but we can give our love for your amazing fic you know :)

Faith is the last thing you lost I have not lost my faith in this fic... not ever
LePetitPrincesse chapter 23 . 7/20/2010

Your story is lovely! I hope that eventually you'll come back to it; we all miss this story a lot.


wristducky chapter 23 . 7/19/2010
I know that writing is tough. I know that life gets in the way and half the time there's a lot of stops and starts; school, work, family, stress... it's all a factor. Things pile up the energy to keep going with a story seems to be lost.

Then you're away from it so long that the passion you once had for it has dissolved away or just isn't the same.

Sometimes you just lose interest altogether.

But even six months later, I thought I'd let you know that I, for one, am still enthralled by your story. I've even got the movie planned out in my head. lol My hope is that you find the story again and that you continue... But if you don't, I'd like to say thank you. It has been a great pleasure.
Alice-Jaspers Girl chapter 23 . 7/14/2010
you better be writing more... please... write more... we need to see Alice around Jasper's parents... Alice and Rose! PLEASE! Alice and Jasper have to talk it over, Alice has to tell him everything... please? this really isnt an ending... ITS AMAZING! TRUST ME! BEST THING IVE EVER READ! please... please please please...just try to write moreee
Alice-Jaspers Girl chapter 20 . 7/12/2010
Are you going to write more?

please please please please please please please please please :) :D :D :D

im begging you .


more more more.

now ;)

lol :)

im not eager... im just happy :D
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