|Reviews for Gone|
| Winged and Dangerous chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
Wow! You are really good at writing poems! It's weird I have a song I wrote about Edward leaving named Gone. But it's in Edward's point of view. Anyway I loved the poem!
| purelyromantic chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
I love your work! This poem too is amazing. It brings that raw grief intertwined with the numbness so well. I especially love the last three lines...
"Gone is she.
Gone is me.
Because gone is he."
That has such a detached and sad note to it. Heart rendering and made me tear up!
| Eowyn77 chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
Wow! I absolutely adore the ocean/tidal imagery! It dovetails perfectly with Twilight.
I think my favorite line was "Then and Now." It so clearly sums up the tension of New Moon. :) Beautifully done!
| lemon-of-the-tent chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
I adore this! It is so beautifully written!
My favourite phrase was "How did I not see her ebbing and flowing from my reality / leaving my shores exposed, bare, scorched by the sun?"
In a strange way, that made mme think of La Push, and then again of NM, and the cycle continues itself, once again, in the washing-machine of my mind.
This is truly gorgeous and I really hope you post some more in the future!