|Reviews for Waking Up|
| kelley turner1818 chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
| sapphirescribe chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
I'm impressed at how much emotion you could pack into such a short piece. It was great! Thank you!
| Dil9 chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
Lovely story. Pls continue your version of what happened next
| guccisassy chapter 1 . 5/19/2010
This could easily continue! Great story.
| tite-lilith chapter 1 . 3/12/2010
| Robpfan chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
I love this but... WTF?
Why only one chap? It deserves more than that... this would be a great story... I would love to read what Bellas reactions are... although I'm sure she takes him back, I would love to read it here...*sigh* I guess I'll just have to use my imagination...lol
| Queenie chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
| BibliophileBoleyn chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
I like where this story is going. I think it would be interesting to have Bella's scent "wake" Edward up. I have read other stories about Alice going back to Bella but not Edward, and Bella's scent would have to be on her a little. I know how hard it can be to write when you don't have a lot of reviews, but I hope you pick this story up again. Your story has more reviews than my two chapter story, and I'm sure you will get more if you keep going!
| sherylb chapter 1 . 7/18/2009
It is so sad how broken Edward and Bella are.
| Khait Suten chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
Please continue! It was wonderful, and I need more! Please!
| SnapCrackledThePop chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
I thought I'd read this one too because your others are so good and the ones I have saved are not being updated lol. I thought Bella was going to be dead, woosh :)
| isa90 chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
OMG! This was such a good start!
That must hurt!
You shoul do a sequel or not leave it at 1 Chap!
| cravingtwilight chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
i really enjoyed this chapter! are you planning on writing more?
| linnjinn chapter 1 . 3/27/2009
I want more :) I want to see him go get her.
| phoenixhunter47 chapter 1 . 3/27/2009
This one shot totally packs a powerful punch. Really good writing.