Reviews for Waking Up
kelley turner1818 chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
white more
sapphirescribe chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
I'm impressed at how much emotion you could pack into such a short piece. It was great! Thank you!
Dil9 chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
Lovely story. Pls continue your version of what happened next
guccisassy chapter 1 . 5/19/2010
This could easily continue! Great story.
tite-lilith chapter 1 . 3/12/2010
Poor Edward!

Thank you!
Robpfan chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
I love this but... WTF?

Why only one chap? It deserves more than that... this would be a great story... I would love to read what Bellas reactions are... although I'm sure she takes him back, I would love to read it here...*sigh* I guess I'll just have to use my imagination...lol
Queenie chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
no more?
BibliophileBoleyn chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
I like where this story is going. I think it would be interesting to have Bella's scent "wake" Edward up. I have read other stories about Alice going back to Bella but not Edward, and Bella's scent would have to be on her a little. I know how hard it can be to write when you don't have a lot of reviews, but I hope you pick this story up again. Your story has more reviews than my two chapter story, and I'm sure you will get more if you keep going!
sherylb chapter 1 . 7/18/2009
It is so sad how broken Edward and Bella are.
Khait Suten chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
Please continue! It was wonderful, and I need more! Please!
SnapCrackledThePop chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
I thought I'd read this one too because your others are so good and the ones I have saved are not being updated lol. I thought Bella was going to be dead, woosh :)
isa90 chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
OMG! This was such a good start!

That must hurt!

You shoul do a sequel or not leave it at 1 Chap!

Greetings :)
cravingtwilight chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
i really enjoyed this chapter! are you planning on writing more?
linnjinn chapter 1 . 3/27/2009
I want more :) I want to see him go get her.
phoenixhunter47 chapter 1 . 3/27/2009
This one shot totally packs a powerful punch. Really good writing.
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