Reviews for My Evil Twin
ZGirl chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
Daniella better look out for Bella! HeHe
Love the story! Please update!
Jojo657 chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
oh get it Bella
Hilary chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
This is really good. You should writ another chapter and make it a full story. I see potetial in it!
Brooklynne chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
Please continue want ti now what happens next! I love it!
ANGEL FALLEN FROM HEAVEN chapter 1 . 5/13/2010
omg omg u have to continue plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz im begging u on hands and knees love it and love u
allstarweekend-guru chapter 1 . 3/9/2010
for making more please-n' thanks.
fresh-BLOOD-was-drawn-2night chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
awe poor BELLA. my sister is called DANIELLA. kool story btw
kellygirl96 chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
haha funny!
KarlaAndTaniaAreImmortal chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
This is going to be great! I can feel it.

-Karla
MRS.waitforit.STARK chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
I'm not flaming you. don't think i'm flaming you.

okay So there is two things majorly wrong with this.

- Bella is WAaY! out of character. I don't know if you intended that or not, but it's hard to believe Edward when the conversation goes like this...

Edward - "Bella's more of a women than you will ever be!"

Bella - "Yeah you Ass Bitch Fuck Bitch Ass! You whore!"

Seriously.

Edward would not tolerate the language.

AND - Edward would not tolerate the way Bells is treating her sister or the way Bella's twin is treating her back.

Fix that. It would be much better if you did.

NOW, for the part that's not critizing -

I liked the idea. Interesting. Just fix the language
Rose chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
luv it...plz...write more...i will be waiting...
Twilight-Kitty01 chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
OMG if i was Bella i would have kick her ass all the way home! Omg how b-i-t-c-h-y do have to be her! God take her away!(Screaming at the ceiling and on my knees)
Foxy-Fire6677 chapter 1 . 2/14/2009
TWO WORDS: CAT FIGHT!
RomanticVamps chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
lol!

Hey.

You should so totally continue this!

I need to know what happens...

will it be something like bella moves in with edward or will daniella got to another room or...

I NEED to know what happens.

please please please please please please please please?
DivergentAnimeGamer chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
Wow. This is interesting. I can't wait to see what will happen next. Please update soon.
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