|Reviews for Enemy|
| middle school was a dark time chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
Excuse me, stop being awesome. It's not okay.
Love love love. I love this fic really hardcore. D: Well characterized, well thought out. Drabbly, but that's A-OK.
| Lythdan chapter 1 . 2/5/2009
Oh wow. This story was so wonderfully well written. Canon only ever really hints as to why Manfred undertook the actions that he did, and I think you've come up with a very good explaination.
There's a small typo somewhere where it says 'ti' where you probably want 'to'.
I love your Manfred characterisation. He definitely isn't the type to rest until he knew what was causing his obsession with Gregory-and as soon as he does, zap, he's dead. Nice ending, btw. :)
| Dean Gabriel chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
That was EXCELLENT. Just brilliant. I loved it, it was all so ICC :D Great job, 4.5/5 :D