Reviews for Falling for the Enemy
RedEyedWarrior chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
I think this was an awesome fic. You practically own the romance sections that involve Ezekiel and Bridgette, dating either each other or other people. Well done.
madim chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
What as EPIC story :)

I love it, i wasn't excpecting that LeShawna will would say that Geoff should ask Gwen out. I personally think that Geoff and Gwen aren't that great together; i prefer her with Trent. But that is just my opinion, pretty please don't get offended.

All in all, i love this story :)

~ Madim
this account has been hacked chapter 1 . 12/22/2009
I'd say this story is amazingly epic, but that would be an understatement.
rainbowxXrachel chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
I have actually always thought that Courtney and Noah would be great together! However, I don't particularly love LeshawnaxDuncan, it was cute. When I read something written by a person who's voice and/or personality I know, and it is written right, I can actually hear them saying it, pretty cool hm? It's sort of like in the movies, how they have voices narrarating texts, letters, and emails. That happened when I read your story, I could hear the dialogue.
enteryournamehere5 chapter 1 . 2/5/2009
I love your story! Keep it up!
Imagi chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
*snickers* Courtney's other favorite nickname.

Yep Duncan's sharp. It only took him one sentence to understand what happened. I agree with Zeke though.

And that Grizzly gets into everything doesn't he. :D

And new nickname for Courtney courtesy of LeShawna! Appropriate too...Zeke wasn't wearing one now was he?

EZZY romance! E! :D And shocking kiss in front of Killer Bass! Double E! :D

Honestly I thought LeShawna and Ezekiel were going to switch teams, but the thing with Courtney worked okay...ZEKE GOT TO STAY! :D

And Courtney and Noah? I think that's a little too odd even for me!

Loved this the three main couples worked out well and as always...


elly755 chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
whoa, this is weird...
StarReader86 chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
Looks like Winter-rae has some competition for the best Duncan-LeShawna stories on FFnet :D You kept everyone in character, including Courtney, and we got to see Bridgette and Harold and Izzy and Ezekiel hooking up, yea!

The Courtney/Noah at the end didn't seem right, in my opinion. Trent might have been better, after all music does soothe the savage..., ah I won't go there. But hey, its your story and this story was amazingly written just like your TDC story.

I look forward to more one-shot stories from you!
Islanda chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
That was another really good oneshot. I love your pairings!
JoeMerl chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
What I thought was going to happen was that, since Duncan didn't actually vote, he would just vote for someone other than Ezekiel and either make a tie or (somehow) result in someone else getting kicked off...but eh, this works too.

Anyway, another great story! My, what an exciting first got all the couples together well, and basically this was yet another really cool fic. Dang, I wish I could throw together something as well as you and Winter-Rae...
Fluffy Otters chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
Wow, I freaking loved this. I love the thought of Duncan and Leshawna and am totally digging it, especially since Courtney pisses me off with her hypocriticalness (and other things) and while I love Duncan/Courtney because it pretty much is the show pairing and there are times when it can be cute, the only reason I like that is because of Duncan who is just sexy.

Harold and Bridgette is different for me but I guess Harold does have skills. I suppose he doesn't deserve all the meanness he gets. He creeps me out but he can be (kinda) cool like in Dodgeball and Dancing, he is really good at those.

Hah, I love Ezekiel in this! All these wonderful stories about Ezekiel are making me love him! And Ezekiel/Izzy was interesting, I never thought of that and actually, Izzy was really cool in this! Izzy scares me and she is totally insane but in this she was really deep and all understanding! Awesome! While still insane, she is much less than she normally is. And I love Chris! Guy worries about his hair and loves to torture them!

Geoff/Gwen...I wanna see that. Or Justin/Beth. Or Duncan/Gwen.

You're stories are amazing!
Life.GetOne chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
I find myself liking Izzy/Ekeziel more and more every time a read a fic featuring them...

Anyways, I loved this little fic. The teasing going on between LeShawna and Duncan was so cute. Go D/L!

LOL! I loved the part when Courtney was making out with Noah, since she was the one complaining about everyone dating people on opposite teams. I'm so glad she got a happy ending.

Wonderful fic! I'm faving it!
kikimalfoy chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
lol this was one twisted story but I have to say i enjoyed it
Natureboy3 chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
Nice job Kobold!
Winter-Rae chapter 1 . 2/2/2009

Jeez you're so quick! I'll respond to your PM after work. I just have some time right now to read and review this. When I seen it was posted I litterally cheered and jumped around! I'm so excited! Thank you so much!

On with the review!

I loved Duncan's comment about what planet thay found Eva on, that was hilarious!

AHAHAAH! Oh poor Ezekiel. He's gonna think Duncan has a death wish. Poor Zeke, he needs love!

Oh boy, Duncan in the girl's cabin, he's gonna get his butt kicked for going through their stuff. I love pervy Duncan, he makes me very happy. Loved the part about him nicking the girl's panties, hilarious. Izzy's little notes one hers totally made me crack up.

Loved when LeShawna caught him. I love those two together! Holy crap! A bear!

Baby Boy! Yes! Best nickname ever! I'm so happy you used it! I also liked the reason's you gave. All are so true. LeShawna you can't resist Duncan!Chris messing up the hell hath no fury line was great. I loved Zeke in this part. He's so nobel! How could they want to vote him off now!

OMG! LeShawna was checking him out! Yes! Loved that! Also loved the conversation about them being on different teams and how Duncan is straight with people, most awesome!

"In a completely innocent manner by pressing my ear to the side of the wall.” Totally an Izzy line! I loved her and Ezekiel's scene. Too lovely. The two of them talking was so awesome! Zeke cluelessness and Izzy's epicness! It was friggin wonderful!

Aww poor Harold. He has mad skills though. He'll win Bridgette over. Friggin Courtney. Ahahahah! Dj jumping into Geoff's lap cracked me up. That was great.

Duncan and LeShawna telling each other about themselves totally made me giggle. "You are nice, I can see it in those baby blue eyes, Baby Boy.” Such a cute line! And Duncan blushing! So sweet!

Yes! Izzy to Harold and Bridgette's romantic rescue!

Oh yeah! The kissing scene was awesome! LeShawna would so do that! I'm all giddy now!

I love Izzy carrying Zeke around, the visual is so cute. And her rubbing ehr nose against his made me coo.

The whole scene with them talking over each other was great. I could so see that happening in the show.

Aww! Uber cuteness all around! I loved it so much! The whole romantic setting, Izzy's analysis of Duncan, Harold and Bridgette! Damn the whole scene was lovely!

LeShawna standing up for Duncan when Courtney yelled at him was awesome! Poor Izzy, I could just see her face as Ezekiel was about to go! Zeke and Duncan kissing the girls in front of everone rocked my socks!

I loved that you made a comment about Chris' hair, that was friggin awesome! I'm so glad Courtney stood up for them! That was...nice? of

Poor Geoff. He looks so cute with Gwen though. I just watched that handcuff episode last night. Best episode ever!

The ending kicked ass, Courtney and Noah, that made me laugh. His speaking french excuse was great too! The whole fic kicked ass! Thank you so much for writing this! I'm going to be in a good mood all day at work now!

*glomp hugs and kisses, LeShawna style!*

This is the best fic ever in the history of fanfiction! In my opinion Thank you! I loved every word from beginning to end!

You are the best! I love you!

Much love!

Winter-Rae xoxo
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