|Reviews for Blood Brothers|
| amata0221 chapter 6 . 8/31/2014
Great story, I hope you will continue writing this. It's so funny, Draco and Hermione looks cute so does Sirius and Narcissa.
| billi-rse chapter 7 . 12/20/2012
Has it been adopted yet? I'd love to read more.
| eimearOx chapter 7 . 9/19/2012
Has anyone happened to adopt this story i love it!
| Eunice Candy chapter 7 . 5/14/2012
Aww... You're abandoning this one too... :(
You write really good stories, but yeah.. It's your choice anyway.
I just hope there's at least a slightest chance you're gonna continue it. Lol.
Has somebody adopted it yet? I would love to read it. :)
| Eunice Candy chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
I like it.
Really interesting idea.
Btw, you should put some more details, maybe of Narcissa & Lucious using glamour on Henry, so that he looks likr Draco.
Or that they changed his name...
Or you do it on the next chapter? Dunno, haven't read til there, gonna continue this second. XD
| Lady Isabelle Black chapter 7 . 5/8/2012
Love this story
| Cissa-Lycoris-Black chapter 6 . 2/8/2011
You seem to be on a good plot line, I would like to see more sometime :). Excellent writing skills!
| Tsukino Akume chapter 7 . 12/28/2010
You have to keep updating this story. You have to. I DEMAND IT.
This is the *best* Draco-is-Harry's-long-lost-twin story I have found on . Seriously. (Honestly, it was getting to the point that I was becoming tempted to write my own long-lost-twin fic just to make the concept *work*. Even though I have no plot or any ideas beyond the basic premise. c.c;) You address the issue of why they don't look alike and why no one knew logically. You have Harry and Draco freaking out without being too over-the-top or having them instantly getting along, but somewhere in between. (I also adore the repeated slapping of Draco when he goes into shock. And Sirius in general, because your Sirius is absolutely hilarious.) It's just ... it's everything a long-lost-twin story *should* be. Except finished. -Glares at you-
I do have a couple of concerns you may want to go into. Hermione and the Weasleys seem to be oddly forgiving of Draco after so many years of fighting, and vise versa. In Harry's case I can understand it because Harry's always been so desperate for a family, but with the others it seems a bit too 'everything's hunky-dory now'. None of the adults seem overly surprised or upset about the news, or in the case of Remus and Sirius, feeling betrayed they hadn't known what really happened to Henry. Also, one thing I would *LOVE* to see you get into - because so many of these fics ignore it for some reason or only pay attention to Draco's side - is Harry and Draco's reaction to each other's childhoods. Harry's thoughts/response to how Lucius treats Draco and his being forced into accepting the Dark Mark against his will, and Draco's reaction to learning his brother lived in a cupboard and was emotionally (and slightly physically) abused/neglected for ten years while being treated like a House Elf. Especially when you consider how Harry has always downplayed it. It's the sort of thing that would change their entire opinions of each other, and it drives me nuts when writers ignore or pass over it. And with that you could also get into the adults reactions, because it's never really clear in the books how much they know - or if they even care. Ooh, and you're doing wonderfully with the 'I have a mother and he doesn't theme, but perhaps get into Harry and Narcissa's reactions to each other, because there's no way *that* can't be awkward. Another thing I'm hoping for - just because I'm me and I adore sibling fluff - is not to see you focus too much on the romance rather than the growing bond between Draco and Harry. Not that you *are*; it just bears mentioning.
Oh, and if you still need a nickname for Henry, you can 'steal' the one I'm planning for Harry in my Harry Potter/Gundam Wing crossover if you like: Ree. Or Ry, depending on what Draco prefers.
But most importantly, I WANT MORE. NOW.
| cookyc chapter 7 . 9/16/2010
I think this is a great story as to your question on adding twins I say yes and have both Harry and Draco parted with them that they were contracted by both parents
Draco and Moine as good friends
Dracos mom now being a mom to Harry too
| Sylver-Tyger chapter 7 . 8/26/2010
I started reading this because I thought it would be Harry/Draco Slash so you might want to put Not Slash in the description cause I was slightly disappointed that it wouldnt be slash between our two boys. And to answer your question no i dont think Sirius should have kids at all, not that I dont think hed be a great dad but i'm not too fond of OCs and especially ones that would have a pretty significant roles as Sirius' kids would. I like Harry having him all to himself and I dont want Sirius splitting his time between them all.
Also I see you have it kind of set up for Draco to end up with Hermione which i dont know if i'm too happy about. If she doesnt end up with Ron then I like her with Harry. I personally always wanted Hermione and Harry to end up together. I dont particularly like Ginny so I didnt like when her and Harry ended up together. And I wouldnt want her with Draco either. I know that Hermione and Draco would logistically make sense since they are kind of alike but I just dont like it. So thats just my opinion, hopefully more will feel the same so that you can be persuaded to change some things around. I'll probably continue reading no matter what you do because this is a good story and very interesting. YOu write very well and I love how you portray Sirius and everyone and how funny the dialouge is. A pleasure to read. I hope you update soon.
| HedwigFly chapter 7 . 8/21/2010
I really want you to continue with them in school!
p.s. can I have two tickets to your mind?
| Night13 chapter 7 . 8/20/2010
Damn its been a long time since you updated but please don't make Draco paired up with Hermione i find it somewhat disturbing don't know why O.O And about the new characters i think you should really just focus on finishing this story without adding more. And yes Sirious would make a good father just look at how he treats Harry practically like his son so i agree with you on that-
| Teufel1987 chapter 7 . 8/19/2010
Um, in this story, from what I have seen, Sirius was in Azkaban for 12 years, and on the run for two before being declared (I think) innocent ... so he really wouldn't have the time to impregnate a woman to have twins as old as Harry and Draco/Henry ...
not to mention the man was pretty much a lady's man before being sent there ...
so unless you are saying that he secretly hooked up with Padma and Parvati's mother and that the girls are actually his children, any kids of his would have to be born in the future after he hooks up with someone ... so you'll have to find someone for him to settle down with ...
And well, when you spend 12 years in the company of evil psychic creatures who make you relive your worst memories, with no contact from the outside world, it can be hard to grow up, and it can be hard to be fully sane! It is a real issue there ... after all, his darling cousin was pretty insane ... and she was there in Azkaban for a much lesser time than he was!
And I think that if he were to settle down, it would be after Harry turns 17, mainly because he sort of has grown up, and does feel a bit of guilt for leaving Harry like that when his parents had died ... I mean, he left his infant newly orphaned godson to pursue a personal vendetta ... because of which, his godson had a really shitty childhood which he found out later about ... I think that would make him guilty enough to make his godson his first priority till Harry is 17 at least ...
Also, since you mentioned that cabinet, you would have to find a way to help Draco/Henry out from that really sticky situation he is in ... an option would be to just fake Draco's death, and introduce Henry to Hogwarts with a back story that he was sent abroad (to France perhaps since they know the headmistress of the Beauxbatons) and separated from his brother for both their safety ... give some bull of them being in touch with each other and forge some certificates that prove that he took his OWLS in Beauxbatons ... and to ensure that nobody comes up and says that they never remembered him in class, say that he was home schooled and gave his OWLS as a private student ...
Somebody else can take over the job of repairing that cabinet ... hell, the Order could set a trap to catch the Death Eaters!
| B00kw0rm92 chapter 7 . 8/19/2010
Love, love, love, LOVE this so far. Harry and Draco as twins is like ... my favorite thing ever. I can not wait for you to update this!
| NX-Loveless-XN chapter 4 . 8/19/2010