Ladies and gentlemen, Sonic the Hedgehog as you've never seen him before. Gripping.

This, ladies and gentlemen, is how you write.

I love the way this was written, very nicely done. The quality is good despite the fact that it is short. You used your words so eloquently and the flow is magnificent. I found no grammar errors while reading it which allowed for that flow to work its magic.

You made a smart choice by using Amy as the observer-it fits her character very well seeing as she is constantly after the hero and maybe she studies him from time to time. I would imagine her finding little details in the hero that others fail to see, and perhaps that would add more to her admiration for him.

Anyway, it was a great read and thank you for providing the community with a good piece of fan fiction.

Happy writing!

-Faye Lock

That is... both intriguing and disturbing. I like it!

Oh my gosh... This oneshot is great. It almost made me wanna cry. People (and admitedly, myself as well sometimes) seem to forget that Sonic's only a teenager. It must be REALLY REALLY hard on him. Your 'fiction is just absolutely great and truely amazing. Keep up the fabulous work.

Wow. Beautiful!

Wow...Just...Just wow...I'd have never thought...Bravo. You write so eloquently it's...It's beyond what I can say. I feel compelled to keep an eye on what you write in the future. Well Done!

Impressive. You've successfully given Sonic's character depth and internal struggle, in which the games fail at doing. Quite exceptional.

I have to tell you, I loved the shit out of this.

I only wish there was more here.

The work of a true master.

Commendably done.

Nicely done. Interesting choice of detail.

I've always knew it... This was profound.

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That was deep. A great insight into Sonic's mind. I love insights into the mind of characters, fall head over heels for them every time.

Keep up the great work!

Whoa, this is a very deep insight into Sonic's mind. You capture all of his secret fears and doubts so well. This is surreal.

Just a note: The genre could be changed to "Spiritual" instead of "General," and where is Amy involved?

You did a great job here, Flying Waffle of Doom. I'm going to recommend this story for a community called "Dark Side of the Hog," which focuses on darker interpretations of the Sonic cast, such as this one. Keep up the good work.