|Reviews for Visions of Death|
| corrirouell chapter 15 . 7/8/2013
I think it would be great to see things from Eleazars pov from when her meets would be a nice little twist in the story.
| PurpleSomeone chapter 15 . 4/5/2013
Love your story!
When are you going to update?
Can't wait to see what's next!
| Mythgrl chapter 8 . 3/14/2012
You took the # placement of each letter in "black" from the alphabet and added them up.
| Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 15 . 12/29/2011
Love the story so far! I'd wonder why it's taking so long to update... but I realised in the last few chapters that after you abandon the story for a while you come back to it. The only thing I can tell you to improve is the unknown POV. It's the same sort of thing as the person Rosalie saw in the woods. I suggest if you say something that readers don't already know about a charactor when we're supposed to guess who it is and then you make the person think about the information later, it may make things more interesting. I think I have a slight idea of how the story will end, but I thoughtthey found her sister's body?
Hope this review motivated you to write faster! Can't wait till next chapter! Hopefully I don't die of old age before it's poasted. LOL
| Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 9 . 12/29/2011
Was it supposed to be obvious who Rosalie was seeing in the woods? I found it was... but I could be wrong...
| December-eighth chapter 15 . 11/2/2011
hey, i hope you get your muse to finish the whole plot :) i love your writing!
| Once Upon A Time I Hated You chapter 11 . 10/22/2011
why do you keep saying carlise instead of god
| Once Upon A Time I Hated You chapter 8 . 10/22/2011
b2, l12, a1, c3, k11, 212131129
| Cirruz chapter 15 . 10/22/2011
Haha, I can't wait to see how this goes! Thanks for updating! And do it again soon 'kay?
| Cirruz chapter 14 . 10/21/2011
OOOH! UPDATE SOON! And, I'm glad your back :)
| blackrosewitch1996 chapter 14 . 10/21/2011
Thanks for updating. I really like this story. I have a suggestion for your story. I've read a lot of twilight stories and I do mean a lot and majority of them have Tanya bein the bad guy so I was hoping maybe have Tanya kind of take to Bella and defend her from Edward because I'd really think that Tanya would be a really good good guy. You can use this if you want it's just a suggestion but I'd really appreciate it if you did
| EmmaRandomAs chapter 14 . 10/21/2011
| shayna chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
yup heyy yeah im shayna and jade is my twin and anyway she was gonna curse u out for not having any other thing twilight so yeah u just lost2 twin readers
| Jade chapter 13 . 9/13/2011
what the freak? again another cliff hanger seriously this is my only free time post quickly or u have just lost a reader
| December-eighth chapter 13 . 9/5/2011
Please hurry and update, I CANNOT wait until you do, I love this story!