Reviews for 4 Things Not to give the Weasley Twins
Screamer's girl chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
OMG lol this is so funny! I can't believe I didn't read this earlier. I knew you'd write something totally random... like the twins on coffee. I wonder what I'd be like on coffee. Hm...
Ferretess xxx chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
i love this story! :D
Kokoro Phantomhive chapter 3 . 10/1/2009
Update soon
Kiluca1228 chapter 3 . 9/28/2009
awesome please update soon
chocolatemakeseverythingbetter chapter 3 . 7/26/2009
I'm liking this! I hope it get easier for you over there in Italy:)

hope you update soon :D
inlovewithHP chapter 3 . 5/12/2009
LOL!

this chapter is so funny

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inlovewithHP chapter 2 . 3/26/2009
lol this one is so much funnier

plz update soon!

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inlovewithHP chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
lol

:D
XxXxDreamerxXxX chapter 2 . 3/5/2009
I wonder what would happen if you gave them huge herseys bars...

That would be hiariouse!
XxXxDreamerxXxX chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
I love the weaslys!

Exspecially Fred&George!

That was funny!
SkittlesForTheWorld chapter 2 . 2/4/2009
: ) I could see myself acting like the cofee and the coke would definitely be them.

I wanna add something, I think you should decribe it more, make it able to visualize what happened, like you could have described how they found the coke and how and hwat the makeovers looked like and why Dumbledore was amused!

Other than that, good job!

*Debbie*
MargotMilevaZ chapter 2 . 2/3/2009
Why Dean, why? Why did you have to get Coke? You should've known that Fred and George would get a hold of it.

Similar to what jasper87 said: Dumbledore was amused and that's good.

Basically all I have to say is to use a few more commas in places where you'd pause and some colons where you're about to announce something. I'm not sure if that's Standard English, but that's just how I use it, so there's a pretty good chance that your grammar is correct.

I like how you didn't exactly tell us what Fred and George did exactly that caused them to have to run from those girls: It gives us room to infer what happened.
youarethegirl chapter 2 . 2/3/2009
ow. poor girls.

at least dumbledore had fun.
MargotMilevaZ chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
Scary thought, Fred and George drinking coffee. Poor little first years...

Only thing I have to say is to give a bit more detail, and I also noticed a couple of grammatical errors and a spelling error, but other than that, I love it!

Fred and George drinking Coke... I'm scared, really scared.

It is the pop kind of Coke, right?
yellow 14 chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
I've seen this idea before, in a different format. Very funny, keep updating (for as long as the wizarding world survive this crazyness)
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