XD I wasn't even a big fan of this pairing. This fic made me like it a little more. Haha. I loved all of the dialogue and Kid's lines were so terribly demonic and ADORABLE. :3 Heehee. Four year-old Kid. I would LOVE to see that. Some people write him as this perfect little child who is very intelligent and has symmetry issues. You wrote him as this spoiled kid who is sadistic, manipulative, and easily bored...with symmetry issues. X3 ADORABLE either way, really...

And the "proposal" scene between Stein and Marie? That was just plain hilarious. Loved the part with their not even acknowledging his existence in that little..."moment" of theirs. XD Kid's last line was perfect.

Teehee~! Kid is so evil. I love this story. It made me laugh and squeal.

aw so friggin' cute :D

You, my dear, are an evil genius. XD I find favourite lines nao!

‘“No.” Stein growled, looking as menacing as a mad scientist could when stuck in a plastic child chair.’ i.e. not very menacing ;)

‘With a mournful sigh he put the wobbly antenna on, praying against all hope that this was the one day his accursed weapon didn’t materialise out of thin air to bug him.’ Which of course means he will!

‘“Ahem” he cleared his throat once more, trying to make his high pitched voice sound slightly deeper “We are gathered here today to witness the marriage of Mari-neechan and Stein because Spirit told me that they love each other very much”’ Oh Spirit XD I love him so much. :D

“Has anyone ever told you that my weapon is an idiot?” Yes, lots, but it doesn’t stop you from saying he’s is again. :D

‘Rolling his eyes Stein dropped to one knee, taking the shell shocked weapons hand and trying to remember how to spontaneously combust.

“Marie. I’ve known you for a grand total of 5 minutes and it already feels like a lifetime…” he began, any romantic mood that may have started to grow shrivelled up and crawled back into the cesspool is originated from, Marie growled “You’re annoying and violent and let a 4 year old in a tux boss us around, I’ve always avoided women due to their homicidal tendencies and you have only strengthened that reasoning” …. “Tch” she scoffed, Stein held up a hand to indicate he wasn’t finished, brining it back down to fish an uneaten gummy ring out of his pocket. ….“But you seem fairly capable of a conversation, have a really nice smile that doesn’t change even when talking to someone as weird as me so I guess I could put up with you for a while” he finished, sliding the green and red sweetie onto her finger “Will you marry me?”’ XD Aw, adorable! Stein has gummy rings for what reasons exactly?

Woah, that’s a LONG kiss! XD OMG, so much win! I wish this was in canon too, it would be ADORABLE!

You, my dear, a falafaling EVIL GENIUS!

I was reading this with my father not eight feet away, and I think that my parents have finally resigned to my seemingly random fits of laughter, because he did absolutely nothing when the giggles didn't stop coming.

Kid as a four year old, oh my gosh, it was beautiful.

and the Alien costume...

and I can't type right now because I'm laughing to hard to think straight.

~Fynney

Ah.

It has finally happened.

I can feel myself beginning to explode now.

Your cuteness ability has finally managed to destroy me.

Damn you.

Also-

DEMON CHI-

...

-has blown up-

This. Absolutely. Made. My. Day. :D You're so creative with all the little details, like the antennae on the alien costume. I laughed at the end, too. My only concern it that it's occasionally unclear who's talking (usually when Stein's talking) in the beginning, but I'm a little flaky anyway, so maybe it's just me... :-/ Overall, though, fabulous job!

ADORABLE. Loved the dialogue!

Waii! :)

My eyes almost turned into hearts! ;)

I love it! :D

SteinMarie is one of my favorites! ;D

And because I LOVE Kid to Death! :) Hahahaha

It made me love this more... I want to play babysitter with a 4 year old Kid... No matter how bratty he may be just so I can see him make his cute expressions here! :D

AHAHAHAHA! I'M DYING! I can't count how many times I laughed during this! It is definitely one of the most amazing crack pieces I've ever read! Fifty gold stars!

(I sincerely hope that Stein and Marie did not begin the birds and bees ritual in front of poor Kid.)

~Bya

aww... that was so cute! Death the Kid in kid version AND the best proposal scene ever! XD Do do do write more of these please!

XD I loved this! even though it ism't exactly my favortie stine pairing, I litteraly squeales at all the semi-fluffy the humor was tottaly awesome! I loved imagning kid as a spoiled brat when he was a little kid.X3 HE'S SO CUTE! Very good for a first soul eater fanfic. I REALLY hope to see more.

Ah! I am so going to have to read soul eater now if this is the wonderful stuff that comes out of it xD Kid sounds awesome...he's the one you fangirl over on a regular basis right? XD Keep up the epic work pip. You can probably change this fandom round to the right direction xD

Oh how I wish this was canon too~

This is well done for your first Soul Eater fanfic. )

THAT WAS SO CUTE!

Total favorite, it so made my day, even if its 9:51 pm.