Reviews for Just Another Slip of the Tongue
JK Writes chapter 1 . 8/13/2014
... That was unexpected. Loved it .
Maybe Hinata thinks Kiba is... is...

In love with Akamaru... O.O
Just kidding :3
Hliran chapter 1 . 8/5/2014
LOL omg Akamaru xD smooth move Kiba. This is funny, nice job!
shadowonthesun9909 chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
heres hoping she doesnt say the- OHSNAP! more abiut kiba than i wanted to know... anyway critique... perfect in every way you didnt jump in too fast or start with a back story and speed through it the start was amazing the detail exquisite and the end... d-uuuuuuh... um kiba... no... it was easily the best ive read in a long time if not ever. very good and heres to a succesful career in writing you woulld be great for it
Guest chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
Akamaruuuuuuu! Ahahah. Nice.
AxelXNamine chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
Ok that's great. I can't stop laughing. So worried about her leaving he doesn't even realize he called for his dog. :D
Safirefairy chapter 1 . 10/6/2010

I like it. It's well-written.
NeitherSaneNorInsane chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
Om my god what a fail kiba I mean you were worried about her but you ended up calling your DOG how embarrassing
Lissa.chann chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
Lmao. Truly funny.
One-Twisted-Bee chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
oh shit!:0 hahaha!
swandreamer chapter 1 . 11/25/2009
OMG! He actually mention who? wah! P
FantasyTyper chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
that is hilarious at the end and the rest is awesome
the elsinatr chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
brilliantly written! kudos for creativity! Keep it up!
Carlalalita chapter 1 . 3/16/2009
Okay that was worth waiting for the end! Akamaru - never expected that, but I probably should have,huh?
Pathetically Lovely's so lazy chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
oh, poor kiba.
Mizame chapter 1 . 3/13/2009

Well written, in depth and intricate.

Grammar is good and Wording is fantastic.



KUDOS! Overall, baby, you have one very god Lemon right here. I love it. Akamaru...
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