|Reviews for Just Another Slip of the Tongue|
| shadowonthesun9909 chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
heres hoping she doesnt say the- OHSNAP! more abiut kiba than i wanted to know... anyway critique... perfect in every way you didnt jump in too fast or start with a back story and speed through it the start was amazing the detail exquisite and the end... d-uuuuuuh... um kiba... no... it was easily the best ive read in a long time if not ever. very good and heres to a succesful career in writing you woulld be great for it
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
Akamaruuuuuuu! Ahahah. Nice.
| AxelXNamine chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
Ok that's great. I can't stop laughing. So worried about her leaving he doesn't even realize he called for his dog. :D
| Safirefairy chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
I like it. It's well-written.
| NeitherSaneNorInsane chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
Om my god what a fail kiba I mean you were worried about her but you ended up calling your DOG how embarrassing
| Lissa.chann chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
Lmao. Truly funny.
| The-Twinkle-In-Your-Eye chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
oh shit!:0 hahaha!
| swandreamer chapter 1 . 11/25/2009
OMG! He actually mention who? wah! P
| fantasytyper chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
that is hilarious at the end and the rest is awesome
| the elsinatr chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
brilliantly written! kudos for creativity! Keep it up!
| Carlalalita chapter 1 . 3/16/2009
Okay that was worth waiting for the end! Akamaru - never expected that, but I probably should have,huh?
| Pathetically Lovely's so lazy chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
oh, poor kiba.
| Mizame chapter 1 . 3/13/2009
Well written, in depth and intricate.
Grammar is good and Wording is fantastic.
KUDOS! Overall, baby, you have one very god Lemon right here. I love it. Akamaru...
| Miss Hydrangea chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
Hahaha... That was unexpected. Having read the summary, I'd expected Naruto to be called out, along with another girl, but I couldn't decide whom it would be. I was wrong on both counts, but the end was certainly more interesting for it. XD
| ALLRRPRP chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
OMG, brilliant! _