Reviews for Picking up the Pieces
thundertamer kasumi chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
Goodness...the feels T.T
ChihiroAyasato chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
Haha, this is very in character.

I can imagine all three of them in a scene if a PW anime existed... (they seriously need to make one btw)

This would be...when Maya was 2 and Mia was 12, right? Because Misty left when Maya was 2, as mentioned in the game.

I like your reference to 'evidence' when Misty was gently scolding Mia.

Very nice fluff moment, great work.
CNightJoy chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
Childhood fluffyness. Me gusta mucho!
Lythdan chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
That last line seriously made me start getting teary. I love stories with Misty interacting with her children in it, because we don't see it in canon.

And the photo where Mia and Maya are trying to piece back the broken urn is some of my favourite art in the entire game. :D So I love that you wrote a story about it.
Arglefumph chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
I remember that being a really cute scene in the game, so I liked it. Maya seems really in character. I know that sounds kinda weird because she's supposed to be two years old, but for what it's worth, I thought she was portrayed accurately here.
reader chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
Aww, that was cute! I loved the last line. There aren't enough fics of these two as kids!