|Reviews for paper wings for paper hearts|
| pulchritudo in omnia chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
I'm basically in love with your writing style. This one-shot was written so beautifully. Gosh.
For some reason I especially loved Dan's part. I probably shouldn't because I think that his sin is one of the worst, but I still loved it nonetheless.
| bijou chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
Oh, goodness. This was lovelylovelylovely multipled by a billion. Yes, a whole billion because I love this piece of art that much.
Firstly, the title. I'm a sucker for a good title. I went to your profile after I looked at HmGirly's Starting Over's review page and I was bored so I thought, 'hey, let's see if there's anything good here.' And this is the only thing that stuck out. It's really a pretty title.
Secondly, I like the whole topic of the 'seven sins' it was... different from a lot of the things I read in this fandom. You get 10/10 for originality! :D
Thirdly, just the writing. Oh wow, it's just really gorgeous. I love it. Write more like this. Please, please, please.
| Rexa13 chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
This was wonderful.
I like how it was darker.
| Forbidden Blue Rose chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
The character choices were perfect and the writing was fantastic! Couldn't have done it any more better
Great job and good luck in the contest!
| Keys2theKingdom chapter 1 . 2/10/2009
I do feel sorry for Jamie, most people, including me, assume the harvest goddess is his MOM, and who could blame him for hating people after that?
T_T poor Jamie-Chan...
| high improbability chapter 1 . 2/5/2009
GAWD! That, good madam, was fabulous! Good luck with the contest!
| nlech16 chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
wow. absolutely fantastic
| Dionysus S chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
"[G]lasses too big for her fucking head." Oh babe, perfect line. And in Greed, the little punctuation was a very nice effect, in my opinion.
The separate stories for each sin were (also) a nice touch. I love the strong language, and nothing's particularity flowery. It's raw and straight to the point. Completely awesome!
| Kuruk chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
One word: GYDFKYVKJH PERFECT! : D
Seriously. I loved it. It was like... sex muffins on a rainy morning while reading the best freaking novel ever and getting the best sleep ever the night before! XD
Need I say more? :D
| vollkommenheit chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
Wow... another amazing story from you, Ekoaleko! :) And what a lovely dark feel it has about it. Good luck in the contest! :D
| farmermum chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
Well done, an interesting story. I really liked the way you gave the characters so much life, Good luck in the competition.
| The Scarlet Sky chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
Entry verified (and now that we've gotten THAT out of the way...)
Good Lord. Wow. Every section has its own distinct feel, yet they are innately connected in their core. I don't know what to call it but pure beauty. Beauty, and yet, it's cold, dark, harrowing. Honest.
Faved, verified, and definitely looking forward to more from you, as always. :)
| Tozz chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
oh, this was really interesting. It makes me feel like I should be writing stuff at least half as good seeing as how I seem to be half as busy as you now. XD; anyways, I liked it :D
| Mage the Observer chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
Wow. This is really nice. I'd put in my usual 'Entry Verified,' but that's Scarlet's job this time.
Still, this is quite amazing. A little something into each view, and all of it showing a reflection of mankind. Well worth reading, in my opinion.
| DoubleKK chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
Oh...I like it. :)
Definatley not what I usually read, with all it's angst and seriousness - but very nice.