|Reviews for Fornever Yours|
| mEEEm chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
Great story :D
I picked up that it was Draco when you mentioned blonde hair :D lol
| Ferretess xxx chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
I guessed it was Draco before I even read it! :) Might have something to do with the fact that I recently went on a Draco-abuse rampage... Well, great sad story. :)
| Rameelia chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
Wonderfully painted picture of anguish. Love it when people take advantage of certain liberties poetry grants in terms of the use of language. "Fornever yours" - absolutely amazing wording; get a strange feeling of fear in the pit of my stomach when I look at it. Means, you've made an impact on at least one reader, which is what the author aims at, doesn't he/she?
The only thing that felt out of place were the words in brackets. Mind you, it's a personal thing - I'm all for the fluency and rhythmical (not exactly rhyming but more like alliteration/assonance, repetition of words/phrases etc.) flow of the language when it comes to poetry, so those interjections were a bit disrupting.
Otherwise, it's a lovely piece of writing. Thanks for sharing!
| mercurywrites chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
That was great!
| LadyLilyMalfoy chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
Ooh! I like it :) Very artistic, very Draco _ Anyone who didn't get is silly and daft lol!
| star-breaker990 chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
when i first started i was like 'could it be neville?'
but then i got suspicious about draco
and the blonde hair part confirmed it!
this is actually really sad! but touching - the malfoys are not as *hard-core* as we think!