Reviews for BROKEN
ReesesCatEyes chapter 13 . 5/11/2014
Just read your story, and I enjoyed it! I have to admit though, sometimes the errors through me out of the story! Keep up the good work
mryann chapter 13 . 5/9/2014
ohhh my,,,, this is a wonderful ending.. it made me smile. frown,.. cry and the works... i have always loved your writing and hope to read more of your works!
mryann chapter 12 . 5/9/2014
ohh my this is too sweet and i love how it is going... they are both mature now and ready to work for it..
mryann chapter 11 . 5/9/2014
ohh this is nice.. they are friends againa and he is trying to fix things up..
mryann chapter 10 . 5/9/2014
ohh what a steammy scene... and what a way to end...
mryann chapter 9 . 5/9/2014
oh ohh... now the past has been said,., but what is his sickness this is really getting exciting... and he really do love her... sigh..
mryann chapter 8 . 5/9/2014
this is a sweet chapter.. i love the development of their bond.. and I am much curious of the past...
mryann chapter 7 . 5/9/2014
ohh what will be happening next.. it has been a while and I have been doing something.. hopefully i will be able to finsh this.
mryann chapter 6 . 5/2/2014
ohh he really loves herr... i love where this is taking... i wanted to finish it in one go.. however,. i need to sleep...
mryann chapter 5 . 5/2/2014
ohh they are both confused and he is soo jealouss...
mryann chapter 4 . 5/2/2014
ohh some thing are getting clear now.. hmn... i am jsut excited to know..
mryann chapter 3 . 5/2/2014
ohh now i am curious as to what had happened on that night... hmnnn
mryann chapter 2 . 5/2/2014
ohh my,. juyst when she thinks she have moved on.. he is back...
mryann chapter 1 . 5/2/2014
ohh this is a nice story... i am wondering what will happen next...
angeljme chapter 13 . 9/4/2012
weeeeeeeeee! alls well that ends well in SM world
it would be terrifyingly heartbreaking if Sere & Dare never got their happily-ever-after in every fanfic written about them

great story-telling and pacing of the mystery
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