|Reviews for According to the Women|
| ultra dragon chapter 11 . 12/25/2011
Well I really liked the way you wrote this story, although I am a bit disappointed that you stooped... If you could just do the lase episode of season one (1X23) and third episode of season three (2X03) that would be really great.
Your take on the characters is very interesting and this type of writing was very refreshing for me.
Keep up the good work!
| Lothlorien Aeterna chapter 11 . 9/7/2011
I loved this! I really think you should keep writing these, even though you haven't updated in a while. Lisbon is my favorite character, so I love to read stuff in her POV. And Van Pelt is much more present in seasons 2 and 3, so I think you could write a lot with that :)
| MeggieGirl chapter 11 . 2/5/2011
| walk65 chapter 11 . 1/14/2011
I like this. Are you going to continue ?
| fiona249 chapter 11 . 1/13/2011
Hope you get back to this someday... it's very good. I love the relationship between Van Pelt and Lisbon you show here.
| Anna chapter 11 . 5/16/2010
Loved it ! Your story is so funny, especially chapter 7! I would be very happy to see more of this!
| shallowness chapter 11 . 4/11/2010
I enjoyed this fic - the focus on Lisbon and Van Pelt's points of view was a cool choice. It perhaps worked better in some chapters than others, because of the original content, I guess, but at times they complemented each other nicesly, and overall we saw their mentor-rookie relationship develop. I really liked the moments where Van Pelt had glimmerings of insight about Lisbon's situations, partly because she's a woman too.
| Ninsere chapter 8 . 1/28/2010
Hey, I have just found this fanfic, and wanted to tell you, is quite good! I don't think is necessary for you to point out the POV. Keep up the good work!
| Veras333 chapter 11 . 12/2/2009
Nice to see their point of view. Please, keep writing, I really enjoy reading yor story.
| Jen chapter 11 . 11/1/2009
Hey this is a really fantastic fic. Absolutely loved it.
| SpaceAnJL chapter 11 . 9/19/2009
hehehe. Oh yeah - Lisbon so clearly wanted to slap the woman all the way through that ep, for all sorts of reasons.
| PhoenixWytch chapter 11 . 9/18/2009
Poor Lisbon... I just want to give her a hug. Oh and smack Jane upside the head for being stupid.
Thanks for writing.
| lgmtreader chapter 11 . 9/18/2009
Thanks for this one. I've only seen this particular episode once, but for some reason had really liked it - I think because of Dr. Anspaugh from ER, but also that so very poignant scene where Jane reveals he'd been hospitalized. To me still one of the most important smaller, subtler moments in understanding Patrick Jane. I also really enjoyed his little setup at the end...
Anyway, nice job as usual in capturing the episode from LIsbon and Van Pelts POVs and helping me relive it from a different angle. Brava. Carry on.
| Frogster chapter 10 . 9/14/2009
I'm going for making sure Jane is never alone. ;)
Poor Grace, I hope we get some more VanPelt/Rigsby action in the next season...
| SpaceAnJL chapter 10 . 9/14/2009
I'm liking this series. There was a lot of meaty stuff in this episode, all the double talk of redemption and consequences. Plus, yeah, the whole grinning vengeful lunatic speech.