Reviews for Alleviation of the Moon
Chica De Los Ojos Cafe chapter 8 . 3/14/2009
Oh boy! It seems Celine is really getting along quite will with Zuriel now and that Roland is just as obsessed with bedding his half-sister as ever!

Frogster chapter 4 . 3/14/2009
You continue to do an amazing job!

Celine is not dull-she holds much potential deep within herself, I can tell. I can't wait to watch her grow and develop into her true self. I hope there's some verbal sparring matches between her and Zuriel to come!
Chica De Los Ojos Cafe chapter 7 . 3/14/2009
Aw, all the romantic notions in this chapter were so beautiful to read!

Frogster chapter 3 . 3/14/2009
Amazing job! Zuriel is very intriguing and interesting, even though he's somewhat of a brute. Can't wait to find out what creature he is...
Chica De Los Ojos Cafe chapter 6 . 3/14/2009
OH MY GOD! Roland is her half-brother? And Zuriel did ALL that for her? He really does love her! And wait a minute...a full moon? And Zuriel is missing while their is howling going on? Hmm...

Frogster chapter 2 . 3/14/2009
Ooh, great job! Your elegant writing style filled with yummy details brings the fairy tale to life.

Interesting detail about Roland's features! Hm...

Ooh, am very intrigued about the man in the castle...
Chica De Los Ojos Cafe chapter 5 . 3/14/2009
We finally saw Zuriel lose his temper with his beloved. Celine is imprisoned and yet she went and apologized to him...interesting how things like that work out!

Chica De Los Ojos Cafe chapter 4 . 3/14/2009
Aw, Celine was right, Zuriel's pact with witch was incredibly romantic but so horrible too. She has no say in anything it seems. But Zuriel seems to truly care about her...

Chica De Los Ojos Cafe chapter 3 . 3/14/2009
Well I'm sure Celine will feel at first like she is escaping one unhappy place for another...

Chica De Los Ojos Cafe chapter 2 . 3/14/2009
Oh man, Roland is looking less and less attractive by the minute. Poor Celine.

Chica De Los Ojos Cafe chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
Uh oh...someone isn't happy with an arrangement she agreed to. Interesting.

Anonymous chapter 9 . 3/13/2009
I love your story so far! I feel really sorry for Zuriel, since he's such a nice guy and he's been watching out for Celine for ages. He's the wolf that she hears at night sometimes, isn't he? I don't really know, it's just a guess, and by the way, I hate Roland, he's rude and he's a jerk. Keep Writing!
Frogster chapter 1 . 3/13/2009
Good job! Love your elegant writing style. Looking forward to more!
Rubyrues32 chapter 8 . 3/13/2009
O, you added more then what you showed me. I likes it.

So, will he do what we discussed? Or... is he too repulsed by it?

xD I sound like an avid reader. Mwuaha!
Lauralou12579 chapter 8 . 3/13/2009
EP! Exciting! Can't wait for the Zuriel/Celine stuff tomorrow! *pirouettes, laughing* this is simply too much fun!
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