Reviews for Spring Scent
Guest chapter 7 . 5/30
Sorry but this feels more than a little...forced and overly contrived. Either this fruitcake wants to be with Jake or Edweird. Her slutting up with both is just...all kinds of meh. You can write but how about something...well...something new?
Guest chapter 5 . 5/30
That was...silly
I am so not ever going to see Jake and Dedward as best buds...not ever.
Guest chapter 2 . 5/30
Strange. Bella figured she could just keep using Jake until...well, until she felt like stopping.
The problem was she didnt get that Jake just might NOT want to get used. One dense broad. You bring that out. Kinda cool.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/30
Yep. I agree...It WAS short
Considering the uh...subject matter, well short IS good.
girlcanwrite16 chapter 14 . 2/18
love it so far!
guest chapter 2 . 2/10
i thought you said another cliffy fish! hahaha great story by the way.
Guest chapter 2 . 11/25/2016
I love it so much! U r an incredible writer!
sarahmicaela88 chapter 12 . 9/13/2016
Oh God what trouble is brewing now?
sarahmicaela88 chapter 10 . 9/13/2016
Boys no matter what their age are pigs.
sarahmicaela88 chapter 8 . 9/13/2016
Not depressing quite frankly her fucking mood swings piss me off and make me wanna slap some sense into her.
sarahmicaela88 chapter 7 . 9/13/2016
Ok I dont get why this is rated M.
sarahmicaela88 chapter 4 . 9/13/2016
Wow this girl pisses me off
sarahmicaela88 chapter 2 . 9/13/2016
Ok never understood if it was Bea's wedding than she should want to have the wedding. Not do it to make everyone happy. She has to amke herself happyvas well.
acetwolf94 chapter 16 . 8/10/2016
I LOVE IT!
Guest chapter 4 . 8/4/2016
Ugh! I love this so much it hurts!
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