Reviews for Punch Me, Love Me, Save Me
twisagafan chapter 14 . 8/7/2010
I guess Edward already forgave her for leaving. Who is Mags? At first I thought it was magazines but I guess not.
gossip-bangkok chapter 14 . 8/7/2010
thank you so much! *hugs*

Love it

Can't wait for more
CdrIvanova chapter 14 . 8/7/2010
Great chapter. Thanks!
ARAbiAN bEAUty chapter 14 . 8/7/2010
I abosoutley love your story. So deep.
lozzy035 chapter 14 . 8/7/2010
wow they lwt him out for a bit

cant believe that happened to them

carlos is such an a-hole

they really didnt want to pull away did they

damn he was mad at her

cant believe jamie told her that haha

damn he may have a kid

update soon
shaqbarcalis chapter 14 . 8/7/2010
shit this is getting better and better! LOVE IT!
xx-RedRoseBlackThorn-xx chapter 14 . 8/7/2010
Great chapter. I hope Bella gives in to Edward more. Update soon!
Annie67 chapter 14 . 8/7/2010
love it ! :)

waiting for the next !
bdubs chapter 14 . 8/7/2010
I'm so glad you decided to update this story! It's so good with so many twists and turns. Can't wait to read more!
pandorianlesma chapter 14 . 8/7/2010
Great having an update on this story again, looking forward to more
Sylvianna chapter 14 . 8/7/2010
Mmm... I don't understand... If the mexican guy was still learning English- as you say in your AN-, he would have a good Spanish and a bad English. You made him talk with a bad Spanish and good English!

For instance:

"ventana" is femenine as is "semana". And it's "mujer", not "mejer". I can understand that Edward said "No la tocas"- which is not correct- but he is American and maybe he only knows some Spanish. So that's good characterization.

But Carlos should know his Spanish! In the future, you can use a dictionary to check if a word is masculine or femenine. A good one is /, which is online and free.

Or you can ask any of us who know the language, but I guess that is a bit more difficult since you have to contact us and wait for an answer...

You have also made some mistakes in other parts of the chapter, particularly some sentences which are not clear enough.

Other than that, nice long chapter and hopefully we'll get the next one soon! I find it difficult to follow a story when there is a long time to wait between chapters, but understand authors are busy people!

Best wishes,

Sylvianna
Godschildtweety chapter 14 . 8/7/2010
I like the story
LisaBebe11 chapter 14 . 8/7/2010
Powerful
theshadowofyoursmile chapter 14 . 8/7/2010
holy flying cows with the bad spanish dude...

see...

""Marie," he cooed. "Buenos noches."[buenas noches]

"Lower el ventana," Carlos said. [La ventana]

el es un articulo utilizado con sujetos masculinos el is an article used for masculine nouns...

and the dude it's mexican so he can't go wrong while talking in spanish u know... or well not that much XD...

"Carlos you won't be getting your money it sus hombres don't lower sus armas." [si tus hombres no bajan sus armas] por que no creo k sea it... creo k seria mas un if... no es asi?

I believe that instead of the 'it' there should go an 'if'

I growled, "No la tocas." [No la toques!] as in don't touch her.

"Es su mejer?" he asked me. it should be.. ["Es tú mujer?] cause es tú- it's your/ and woman is mujer... all thought that type of mexican macho usually says 'vieja', 'morra', or some other words I really don't like... "

So yep anything of the spanish you wanna see know, or if u wanna kick my ass... I just tell you as a comment... don't get mad with me please... anything u need with spanish I'm here...

and well... I know that in Tijuana is aweful is good u didn't choose ciudad juarez, Chihuahua cause... it wouldn't go so well for Bella or any female... and yep you are totally right that the people that lives in the borderlines between Mexico and EUA, drive like nutbags, my mom is from Reynosa Tamaulipas and well.. all my uncles fit perfectly Carlos description and one of my uncles is from the federal police but anyways they are puddles of love almost all the time... I just get usually in big discussions over shit like noo.. women shouldn't be engineers that's for guys and stuff like that... or the other shit.. the "oh doll why didn't u got into dentistry, your mom and grandma did soo well"...

and yep I'm studying an engineer major.. engineer in biotechonogly... and I learned to drive in the border line and still don't know how I'm still alive but it helps to self defense driving lessons and directly out of life, hmmm I have never witnessed blackmailing or extortion of the type I have read in here.. but I have never been to the west really I have just gone as far as Coahuila, but well... here we aren't exactly in heaven I mean... at the beginning of the year the military killed 2 students that where about to get their mastery and now there are bullet encounters all over the city and some executed dudes in the safest area in town and I live like 8 minutes in car drive from the place where that hell broke loose, but well... I just don't party as much as I used to and now I get good use of my Blockbuster membership hehehe

Oh yeah... and the average height in Mexico for men goes about ... 1.7 mts... and that's my height I don't really know right now the conversion to feet it should be.. like..170/30.48 I believe... hmm.. and my uncles are like 6 foot tall each dude they are 5 dudes and my mom and well me and brothers we are the smallest of them like I said I'm bout 1.70 my mom too and my sister is the same height as shakira which makes me laugh...

anyways...

it's great that you updated, you might hate me after the corrections but a Mexican dude usually doesn't go wrong in Spanish.. the dude just use a whole lot of slang and I usually have a southern accent all thought I'm from the north of the country and that's because my friends... anyways...

thanks for making things right between Edward and Bella and well.. all hot and steamy.. and the cock block I didn't like it... and I believe it serves James right that he has a daughter he might get a more mature attitude or something I guess or at least it helped a friend...

well I'm out I'll go sleep a little cause tomorrow there's party my mom's b-day and I was up till late cooking pastries and cakes XD

my sister will deal with the beef cause I can't eat it ...

but well.. yep see you around..

atte. Ana Alicia
Fiyaaa chapter 14 . 8/7/2010
Great chapter x
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