Reviews for Palmer's Kiss
OrangeEucalyptus chapter 16 . 12/22/2014
I don't know if I've already reviewed, but im going to do it again. This was so well written, i cried. I could feel what Tony and Pepper felt,imagined the scenes, and totally did NOT feel like any thing was going too fast. I also love how you didn't use any cliches of the characters, but still make them fit. Like Tony and being a loner, or Pepper and the ' business' personality. It was so real, and raw with emotion and i loved every second of it. Happy writing to you, hope to read more work like this. This is gold. Forget the haters, because i was very peeved to read one of the comments, that said 'this sucks, get a life.' it was hurtful, and of course, anonymous. But anyway, please, i hope to see you take up another one soon with a different plot. :)
nancyozz chapter 15 . 11/10/2014
I'm literally depressed that this is over...I've enjoyed every word and cannot remember when an IRon Man fanfic thrilled me so much...so thank you
nancyozz chapter 14 . 11/10/2014
My fav line is Peppr saying that roberts tried to steal their trust...that's exactly what happened and I'm glad they didn't let this or anyone come between them
nancyozz chapter 13 . 11/9/2014
How horrible it must be for pepper to have to sit around and hope tonys ok
nancyozz chapter 12 . 11/9/2014
Wondered if we would get Tony in a dangerous iron man situation...great cliffhanger
nancyozz chapter 11 . 11/9/2014
That is my new fav term...bow butts...do they even still exist? I truly wish this story was 50-100 chapters...I could read it all day every day
nancyozz chapter 10 . 11/9/2014
Excellent angst...both these issues had to be worked out before they got married...glad you addressed them both
nancyozz chapter 9 . 11/9/2014
So beautiful it hurts
nancyozz chapter 8 . 11/9/2014
Your writing for them is so perfect I feel like I can almost see them...love how pepper is still protecting him by stating the pre nup left him vulnerable even though the one he is marrying is her...and love her spending the night even if it's in seperate rooms
nancyozz chapter 7 . 11/9/2014
Well that chapter was perfect from start to finish ..hope Rhodey won't give them too hard a time..I suspect he will have seen this coming before either of them did
nancyozz chapter 6 . 11/9/2014
You've captured Peppers fear of being just another notch on tonys bedpost perfectly...and thouh I'm bummed she ran away and didn't believe in Tonys feelings for her, I'm kind of glad too...he has to work harder than that to win her
nancyozz chapter 5 . 11/9/2014
It's fascinating to see Tony in Peppers apartment...rarely do stories do that and this one is wonderful...love how Tony got no sleep there either lol
nancyozz chapter 4 . 11/9/2014
Is there anyone anywhere who doesn't love Jarvis? I think it's time for Tony to turn up the heat on Pepper
nancyozz chapter 3 . 11/9/2014
So much to enjoy...from their quick make out session in the elevator to Tony having Cedric catch them ...and Cedric's crush is too cute and funny)...and I'm sure the pictures of them were gorgeous...just wish Pepper would stop bringing up that this is temporary
nancyozz chapter 2 . 11/9/2014
There was so much goodness in the chapter...loved the kiss...love the board being happy he's "marrying" Pepper...loved Tony throwing out and smashing his perceived rivals flowers...especially loved wistful Tony wanting all this to be real
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