Reviews for A Final Goodbye
Guest chapter 1 . 3/2/2014
Almost made me cry , damn bosses burn in he'll for all eternity for killing them .D: good job with the story I liked how you ended it
Clear Blue chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
So sad...*sniff*
KCSupido chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
Wow... this story actually made me cry a little bit. If it were up to me, I would have kept them in Brawl. Maybe nintendo will do a Super Smash Trilogy, like the Metroid one.
Nesskirby02 chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
Sad it made me cry.
LoveloveloveJ chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
aww so sad! but I liked it
fleeting . white . feathers chapter 1 . 2/13/2009
Cool story Ayane-chan! I love it! Check out mine I just updated it. Ur fanfic's so sad... i wanna cry! MAKE MORE FFs UR WASTING UR TALENT!
Arauru chapter 1 . 2/5/2009
If this is your first fanfiction, then I'm really impressed! Your idea of them being 'laid-off' is an interesting take on it..It was really upsetting that there was nothing anyone could do to stop them having to go.

Great for a first story. Though they may not be in brawl, the 5 lost smashers will always be remembered..
Akira.Cullen chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
Aww, this is a really sweet story.

Though, it was sad that they had to die :(

I loved the ending, it was especially cute, with the previous smashers' ghosts all standing on the hill. :D

Good job!