Reviews for Welcome Home
EdeatheDemonFox chapter 1 . 12/31/2015
God, this was so cute! Zack's welcome home was so sweet from shy, little Cloud. And dang did Zack's mission sound rough!
raised-perdition chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Okai, first the stupid fanfiction wouldn't let me write a review and then didn't believe I knew what my password is. I know how you feel, Zack. XDDD

So cute, so cute..
RoxasIsReal13 chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
So easy to picture; great job!
Cleonhart chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
. . . AW X3 *loved it* soo cute and sweet and plain adorable
Katana Black chapter 1 . 9/15/2009
Aw! I loved this story. It really is very cute. _
Kranna 25 chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
Hahaha, cute. 3
Xin chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
This was very sweet and cute. I like the light tone you took and both Zack and Cloud are precious. Zack's suggestiveness was great too. :D
modeoheim chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
Aww... Zack, I love you, but I'd never want to be on a mission with you. Sephiroth, on the other hand? Sign me up for SOLDIER, baby!

It's just like Cloud to bustle around and take care of his big First boyfriend... :3

This was cute. .
Expressive Dissonance chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
Aww, sweet and cute! I'm drowning in the fluff! tee hee. I like your description of zack's exhaustion, I know exactly wat he's going thru on some days. 2 bad I don't have my own Cloud to help me out. *sigh*
CrazyCartSalad chapter 1 . 2/6/2009


this is one good story...

hell good...
MinaTakahashii chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
Aw, so very cute! And don't worry Zack, we won't tell Sephiroth!
DarkBombayAngel chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
I like it. It's so cute!
Ethereal-Sage chapter 1 . 2/4/2009


:D That is getting favourited. Damn so cute :) makes me smile.
cranberrysoup chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
Aww, how utterly adorable. This is a lovely piece! There are a few little things you might want to clean up- really just things like a breathe that should be breath and such; minor spelling-type errors here and there. But your characterization seems solid (props for making Zack something more than just a "puppy," and I love the commentary on Cloud's contrasting nature!) and it flows beautifully overall. Maybe it's my own sleep deprivation at the moment, but it was really easy to get into Zack's head. The ramble-ish style was quite fitting. Great job!