Reviews for Fallen Angel
MessintheMirror chapter 22 . 6/1/2009
AW! I bet you are so happy with this chapter! It turned out amazing! Love that Jasper is coming to his senses, and that things are good for them right now! I HOPE you show Rose and Edward having it out, even if its just a small part...love her so much

LOVE the part between Edward and Elizabeth, where shes explaining love to him. That is a beautiful sentiment. Did you write it or is it from something? I have loved this story since the beginning and I can feel it coming to an end. I will be sad, and I will cry, but I will cherish the time I had with it! lol...Sound like my relationship ending!

Thanks for the shoutout! I really apprecaite it! :D
twilightchica17 chapter 22 . 6/1/2009
yay im so glad things turned out how they did. i really hope he doesnt do something stupid tho and messes it up. i like how she told off edward. she had every right to tell him what she told him. i cant wait to see what happens on their first date
frenchmustard chapter 22 . 6/1/2009
woo! this chapter is awesome, can't wait for more!
jumpmagicjump chapter 22 . 6/1/2009
LOL I WAS ALL "FINALY!" XD TH SUSPENSE WAS KILLING ME! AND IF I DIDNT MENTION IT EARLIER, THIS IS BY FAR MY FAVORITE FANFIC OUT OF TH 50 MILLION THAT IVE READ!

OKAY SO NOW THAT I THINK ABOUT IT, IT WUD BE WEIRD TO HAVE READ ALL LIKE 85,0 FFs RITE? CUZ THEY WUD BE TH POEMS, TH SONGFICS, ALL THOSE CHAPTERS! & ALL TH RATINGS! WOW THAT WUD BE SOME FEAT! LOL BUT LIKE I WUD HAV NO SOCIAL LIFE WATSOEVER...

WELL THAT WAS RANDOM...GOSHEZ IM BORED.

OH SO ME & MAH FRIEND TOBY(NOT HER REAL NAME BUT I HAV A LOT OF NAMES FOR HER...LIKE SHEs ALSO JEREMIAH! XD) WELL WE HAV AN "AWESOME GUY NAMES" LIST & IT CONSISTS OF NAMES LIKE 'TRISTAN', 'DORIAN', 'CORY', 'IAN', ETC. & SO WE NEED TO ADD MORE! OH & OUR NEWEST ONE IS 'AIDEN'! BUT SO WERE ALSO STARTIN AN "AWESOME GIRL NAMES" LIST THAT INCLUDES 'JENSEN', 'JADE', 'EDEN', & 'ASTRID'. & SO ALL OF THEM ARE NAMES THAT ARENT REALY COMMON & NO MEANIE BEANIE/WEIRD PPL HAV THAT NAME THEN THEY QUALIFY! SO YEAH...WOW THAT REVIEW WAS LONG AND UNRELEVENT...

ANYHOO, UPDATE SOON AND ALL THAT JAZZ! *pun intended ;]

*Pandy the Dandy*
xoKellyAnneexo chapter 22 . 6/1/2009
aw!

that was SO cute.

i loved it.

so much!

seriously, awesome chapter!
Calliope Jones chapter 22 . 6/1/2009
This- Love is never easy Edward. If we're so lucky to find someone, someone who means as much as Bella does to you for example, then you better fight for it. Fight with all you have. Because hopefully in the long run, it'll all be worth it.

God. Sniffle.
xoKellyAnneexo chapter 21 . 6/1/2009
SO SO SO SO GOOD!

this is my favorite story from you!

GREAT job. i loved it.

jasper's just.. amazing. i 'm so exctied to hear what he's gonna say. ah! awesome.
snoodles chapter 21 . 5/28/2009
What the hell is Jasper going to say! You have to update right away. They finally got a litle ahead and I gotta know whats next.
lionandthelamb4ever chapter 21 . 5/28/2009
reviewing the full story all i can say is... I don't know. It was hard accepting her falling in love with Alices real love in the series. Maybe this should end the same with Luca rather than Jazz... IDK...
Snoball13 chapter 21 . 5/28/2009
damn, this is great! i love how hot and cold they are without even being official. the whole sex thing made it better in weird ways, if only to show just how tormented jazz really is, but damn, this is great! you kno, for once i have no suggestions, i just wanna see what you're doing here! this has got to be my favorite of all of yours, with Within Temptation pulling a close seconds. Oh god, this is amazing! i can't wait to see what jazz is about to do. altho i will be utterly shocked if he gets all sappy on her. prolly pleased, but still shocked, as liz would be, i'm sure, but yea, this is great!
rose la cullen chapter 21 . 5/28/2009
wow! that was really good! very cliffie.
MessintheMirror chapter 21 . 5/28/2009
WAAHOO! Finally, some steps forward! VERY glad to see some progress, especially some hot shower sex! lol...love how the scene turned out, it fit well with the whole chapter.

LOOVE the addiction at the end. Its awesome. Definitely something that Elizabeth needed to do. I am super excited to see whats to come after this...:D cant wait...

sorry the review is short, but ive already told ya everythin! lol...

LynZ
PorcelainRose1 chapter 21 . 5/28/2009
She said the lickle words. I liked it. They finally (kinda) admitted their feelings for eachother. This chapter is perfect. Very well written, and I loved it. That is possibly one of the biggest cliffies this story has had. Please update soon. I dont think i can take it if i dont get to read this for ages. x
BemuxLimsaLivey chapter 21 . 5/28/2009
omg omg omg i cant wait for the next chappie :D
Mina Luriya chapter 21 . 5/28/2009
I for sure agree that she had to reem him out at the end there, Jasper deserved a bitching of epic proportions for being such a dickwad lolz. But i swear, the next words coming out of his mouth better be "I love you elizabeth" or ill jump into this fanfic, hunt him down, and wring his little neck!

Ahem... i mean, uh.. peace and love? lmao. This chapter was great and its amazing how you could actually make me feel what Liz was feeling here. Fantastical! as always ;)
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