|Reviews for Broken|
| Marinelife37 chapter 11 . 12/16/2009
Plenty of drama with a dash of humor. I loved it.
| I Give Headaches To Aspirin chapter 9 . 3/22/2009
| I Give Headaches To Aspirin chapter 11 . 3/15/2009
hahaha yeah Barricade IS cheeky
| I Give Headaches To Aspirin chapter 3 . 3/14/2009
| 2lazy2signN chapter 10 . 2/13/2009
damn but this is awesome! juggling characters and plot twists -frickn wow!
and the subtle humour and the angsty relationships - perfect
| Dante007 chapter 11 . 2/9/2009
Ah...Macx..you did it again. Just enough to thrill and tantalize...and have us begging for more.
Got a couple of questions for you. I went back an reread the Imperfect Deviation Story as it stands so far...and...
how did Will Lennox suddenly transform with guns. In the earlier story with the Section Seven experiment he had to go to Ironhide's room to get weapons because he didn't have any...so how come he has them now?
The wee naughty (but incredibly sexy) dream. How did Ironhide do it? And if what Ironhide said earlier was true..that everything Will feels is reflected by him ...then what did Ironhide feel given Will's enthusiastic reaction...?
Do hope you're going to go into their bond in further depth especially all the potential in naughty dreams and holograms...
Again I simply love your writing so please keep on...
| Moonpiper chapter 11 . 2/9/2009
Loved the ending to your story and how the characters are written with interacting with each other. Looking forward to next story.
| FireSenshi2 chapter 11 . 2/9/2009
As usual I loved your story! Looking forward to the next one! :)
| Shirox chapter 11 . 2/9/2009
Oh i'm really head over heels with your Imperfection series. I love the way you build 'Hide's and Will relatinship:3 Lovely story, i hope to see next part soon:)
| dreamer3chan chapter 11 . 2/9/2009
i was waiting and waiting for so long for you to post something new in the imperfection universe... and i was so delighted and surprised to see you update with a whole new story! you are fast!
as usual, i love your new fic! esp i love sam, so please write about him more in future parts!
i really cant wait to see the sequel to this! and considering a possible decepticon, we are likely to see more action, rite? really really cant wait!
please update soon~
| cmdrtekk chapter 11 . 2/9/2009
A good finishing chapter, wrapping the various storylines up.
| Moonpiper chapter 10 . 2/7/2009
You never fail to deliver a great chapter. I would compare your stories to an ice cream sundae with toppings, both are good and leave me with a craving for more!
| Lutschino chapter 9 . 2/7/2009
Da ich deinen Stories schon so lange Folge, wollt ich mich doch mal melden :) Erstmal muss ich ein riesen Lob aussprechen. Deine Stories sind fantastisch und es macht einen riesen Spass sie zu lesen. Außerdem bin ich schwer beeindruckt von deinen englisch Kentnissen. Ich habe 10 Jahre Fanfictionerfahrung, würde mich aber nie trauen auf Englisch zu schreiben. Ich hoffe jedenfalls noch mehr von dir zu lesen und warte natürlich gespannt auf Chapter 10! :)
| Dante007 chapter 9 . 2/6/2009
I love this Universe and I'm a great fan of Ironhide & Will and you are such a fantastic writer that your work is a joy to read. So this devoted fan thanks you from the bottom of her heart for the pleasure of being able to read your stories. I'm looking forward to the angst between Will and Ironhide as they struggle not only with their relationship but also with Will's developing powers. Not to mention Arcee and Trent. Of course there's also the matter of Tony and finding the second spark - who is it? what is it? I can't see Tony Stark sitting still for long - can you? And his relationship with Hotrod...hm...
Sorry I'm so effusive in my praise but you really are fantastic!
| Moonpiper chapter 5 . 2/6/2009
Sam uses his technopathy to save Barricade. A different use for his abilities, eager to see what Sam does in the future.