Reviews for My Sunlight
milagglad chapter 9 . 8/30/2014
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Guest chapter 9 . 1/19/2014
Well, I really like your story hope you come back to it.
I. W. Cullen chapter 8 . 1/19/2014
Nice very fast paced. I like this no point covering the cannon things we know about, just skipping to the fun parts is the way it feels to me.
I. W. Cullen chapter 6 . 1/19/2014
This chapter was fine but the last one really jumped forward. But I liked it I do not mean that as criticism just an observation.
I. W. Cullen chapter 3 . 1/19/2014
Nice I like it. One of the things I hated about Edward/Bella was his being so bossy. I really have been into the femslash Alice/Bella because they are my 2 favorite characters in the books. This is shaping up to be a really great story.
I. W. Cullen chapter 1 . 1/19/2014
Nice the inner dialogue makes Bella seem less like a dope the way you wrote it.
Guest chapter 9 . 2/4/2013
Why did you stop writing? :(
trang-a-lang chapter 9 . 1/17/2012
please update! this story is amazing!
Cloudstrife3180 chapter 9 . 6/12/2011
awww. is that it? i like this story, its cute. plz plz continue?
DeJee chapter 9 . 12/20/2010
i like yur stori hope you will continue it.
bitten2 chapter 9 . 9/5/2010
Awesome chapter! please update soon!
NandinhaMa chapter 9 . 8/30/2010
very great... i liked!
Emma James chapter 9 . 8/16/2010
awwwwwwwww alicw is so sweet in this fic, :) pms
Payne N. Uranus chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
Haha I'm sorry, I started reading this fic, and this line cracked me up:

"No, No Bells, I maybe old but I still have some sprite in me."

Yeah, it probably wasn't meant to be funny, and by probably, I mean not at all. But I just have to say that I think you meant the word "spright." A "sprite" is either a magical creature, or a popular soda pop. _ And even then, "spright" isn't a noun, so you can't really have it in you, anyway...

I don't know why I'm sharing this. Guess I'm just tired and like explaining the things I find amusing to people who either don't care, or don't appreciate it. Sorry! Anyway, good first chapter!
Cassiopeia Adeodatus Black chapter 9 . 7/12/2010
I'm really enjoying this story. Hope to see an update soon.
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