|Reviews for Capturing a heart|
| Guest chapter 12 . 6/4
Beautiful story .much better ending.
| Guest chapter 12 . 5/26
Adorable!:) This is such an amazing story:(
| nicky trish chapter 10 . 4/23
i looooove it splendid
| kandita chapter 2 . 6/24/2013
How come I'm just discovering this story is beyond me. But, my oh my u had me for a second there:). First off I thought that for sure it was Sasuke in the white robe. And, I also was positive Oro was going to take over Hinata and become his vessel. Good stuff
| JDH1080 chapter 3 . 12/17/2012
To be honest I don't really like this story, it's not that your a horrible writer because your definatly not the worst. You seem to know what your doing, but when i read this i just feel...I'm not sure how to explain it. I guess it could be a mix of things, to me it just doesn't feel like it flows well.
For one this seems pretty boring and predictable. Like Orochimaru appearing out of nowhere and then being incapcitated by Sasuke just felt almost pointless. It would have been cool if when Sasuke had appeared out of nowhere if he had thrown a kunai or something at him, a preemptive strike if you will. and if the confrentation had gone on a little longer but i digress.
Another thing that i feel like when reading this story is that there's no sort of secrecy, and by that i mean that in your sense of writing you just flat out tell the readers whats happening, which is good to inform your reader what's going on but maybe you could work on the way your word things. Make the reader's mind have to work a little, yet paint us a picture that we'll be able to fill the holes in with our own imaginations.
Really those are just a few nitpicks here and there, it'd be a big fat lie for me to say that this is the worse story i have read because it's far from that. To be it's more of a borining story, i don't feel any excitement or curiocity when reading it.
| umnia chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
| Ninja360 chapter 12 . 11/18/2011
This was such a cute story! I loved the ending :)
| ADW chapter 2 . 1/6/2011
That was brutal but still good
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
This is pretty good for a first fanfic
| hinata-fan2 chapter 12 . 9/18/2010
i like your story
| oneXeyedXgirl26 chapter 12 . 7/5/2010
that was great
| Wise and Observant chapter 12 . 6/4/2010
It was a nice story, though I thought there was too many fighting scenes and there would have been other option if sasuke had ever been captured or returned to Konoha
| SasuHinaLover27 chapter 11 . 5/10/2010
I love this story as well as SasuHina!
I love SaiIno!
I love ShikaTema!
I love Neji10
I HATE Suckura Whoruno!
| crookshies chapter 12 . 5/3/2010
If only some of this can come true in the series...
Thks for sharing...:)
| in your dreams as well chapter 12 . 4/26/2010
aww so cute