Reviews for Bedazzled
eye ree chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
you're more than a fish to me (8) (8) i was cracking up with the nerdy bella at the beginning to which people didn't exactly react positively since i'm at the freakin library at my school... HANYWAY! really funny, really cute, really sweet and really sexy!

p.s: soy alergico a los crustaceos! xD
Anzhela chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
this is really good

yet another to add to your list eh?

i better go vote then XD

Sapphire x
NanMcCullen chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
I really enjoyed it. I like how Edward is taunting her and teasing her in between her wishes. Sexy Edward is probably my all time favorite. :D
lorit chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
Loved it! I liked the different Bellas, it had to be a blast to write. And as always...Aww...Edward. My favorite line "Have you ever wanted something so much, and then you think you have it, only to find out it belongs to someone else?" Made me sigh and nearly get teary, but that's all just because of my current situations.

Thanks for the story!
fadebymoonlight chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
I loved it!

That was so good!

I love that movie also!

don't worry...i like ur story better than the movie!


keep writing stories!

They're great!

twilightnaley19 chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
lulabelljane chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
I loved this! I haven't seen the movie in a couple years but it was hilarious...and you are awesome for putting Bella/Edward in the roles!

Great job!
cshorte chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
Loved the story!
Nostalgicmiss chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
I love bedazzled and I love that you did this Edward and Bella style. Your writing never ceases to amaze me. You truly have a gift and I hope you continue to write.

It was perfect!
sarahbellxx chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
haha this was really good...and i have to agree about the movie..i love it! when he is the sensitive guy and he starts crying over the sunset each time he sees kills me
ObsessingOverEdward chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
Aw, shucks! You made me blush with that Author's Note. I'm just thrilled you wrote a sweet little one-shot for our silly contest.

I vaguely remember this movie so I think I need to add it to my que and watch it again. LOL.

Great one-shot. I loved the nerdy Bella in the beginning that was so dense that she couldn't figure out that her co-workers were ditching her. Her awkwardness made me feel sorry for her.

I loved the way the wishes were twisted into something that she didn't really want. I laughed out loud when "experience" turned into porn star.

Then there is Edward. I loved how he wet from flirtatious to amused to sad to nervous to happy. Mood swings galore. Perfect Edward! Ha!

Then the lemon. sigh. It was great, as usual.

Thanks for sharing with us!
TwilightBEL chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
I always love your stuff! This is no different. I wish you had room to do more wishes, too, or atleast let us know what they would have been. I also wish there was a bit more ExB interaction before the lemon. Just how did he get his job? I kept waiting for a 'freeing the genie' moment at the end there when she wished for E's happiness. As if her wish broke the bonds the devil had placed on him.

I have been a fan of yours a long time but I've never written anything until this contest. I had a HARD time with keeping under the max word count, too. (Mine ended up over 250 words so I had to do some SERIOUS editing! LOL) It's hard with a story this good. I LOVE Bedazzled. It's such a great movie and I'm glad you used it.

All that being said, I loved your one-shot. It really turned out great.
amgglekim chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
I've actually never seen the movie, but I'm gonna add that sh*t to blockbuster right about... now.

Loved the story, fun & flirty, just the right amount of drama... fun stuff!
literatefanatic27 chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
For the first few parts, I couldn't even imagine Bella, all I could see was Brendan Frasier! Gah! But I love that movie, especially when he wanted to be rich and ends up being a drug lord; that was just too much! lol!

Sonnet about your hair *laughs*
Bina88 chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
hahaha that is such a great story! i loved that movie as well!
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