|Reviews for Ask For Another Day|
| CJaMes12 chapter 27 . 3/2
This story was absolutely fantastic- the level of detail and the fabrication of events... I really enjoyed reading it. Thank You!
| unilocular chapter 27 . 3/8/2013
i just rediscovered this remarkable story the other day. it's like coming across a favorite book again that you know is fantastic. but you've forgotten all the wonderful twists and turns that made it so great, so you have the opportunity to fall in love all over again. i love, love, LOVE the characterizations of this story along with the dialogue. each voice sounds like a distinct person with actual depth and motivations. you manage to capture a character's shortcomings to make them realistic.
i've always loved the way you write vick infinitely more than she ever appeared on the show. the depth and voice you gave her makes her quite possibly one of my favorite characters in any book (or fanfic) i've ever read. the show gave you a good headstart, but you made her feel like a real person. heck, all the characters in this story felt remarkably real.
absolutely love notte and the whole crazy family. they were perfect.
i've been reading it off and on for a few days and i've been forcing myself to go to bed every night even though all i wanted to do was finish this story again! hands down, this is the best fan fiction piece i have ever read and it ranks up there as one of my favorite "books" since it is definitely an epic novel!
again, thank you for writing this.
| godessofthelonely888 chapter 27 . 11/13/2012
This is the best story I have ever read! You seriously had me getting all paranoid, you got me scared, and may I say I am sooo freaking happy with how you ended it? This right here should become like a few episodes on the show or something, this is just freaking fantastic! You even had me pacing in my room mulling over the details because I got so worked up reading this! Well done! Thank you so much for writing all of this and then posting it up on here! Freaking amazing!
| unobtrusivescribe chapter 27 . 6/22/2012
Fantastic story! It was so interesting and exciting! I loved the way it was written from various POVs. Also the Shawn and Lassie dependent / saving relationship was great! I was sooo mad with Vick for theongest time, but I'm glad she finally came around at talked to Lassiter! I had no idea what to think when Gus was sent to jail, that was crazy! The way Shawn put himself out there really changed people's views/ perception of him, it was great to see him fighting for lassie.
Creepy, that family is so creepy! Can you say obsessed much! How about delusional? At least the police finally cracked the case and got there in time to save them.
I like the pronunciation of Italian stuff in the journals, also using Italian was a really cool aspect of the story!
The story was so interesting and compelling, I really couldn't wait to continue reading! I also like how Henry took Lassie under his wing and then Marks showed up was pretty cool (I already started to read the Yang one with him in it)- I like his particular personality.
I cant believe Shawn just jumped in the water after Lassie! That was awesome! Good thing there was some closure about the drug thing and between the need to repay one another (Shawn/ Lassie). I wonder if he'll keep that lawyer in the future- he went to extreme measures, but the insights were helpful, though gone about the completely wrong way!
Oh, and Jules! I love how powerful she became, even Lassiter noticed! Amazing, heart-wrenching tale:)
| Pinahn chapter 27 . 6/21/2012
I'm a little late on the feedback love but this story is awesome. It's easily one of my faves. :D
| Moonblaze335 chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
This is one of my favorite Psych fanfictions ever!
| CelticClover chapter 27 . 1/10/2012
So I just read this entire story and it was pretty fantastic. Wonderful writing. My favorite stories are the ones that are written so well that I feel what the characters feel, and this was definitely one of those stories.
| animallover15243 chapter 15 . 4/25/2011
this story is fantastic! ive spent the last two hours reading this and its amazing. also, the whole thinking of something and then fainting thing reminds me of harry potter for some reason :)
| Alohagirls101 chapter 27 . 4/22/2011
k i just have to say that this story was amazing!
| The Woods Witch chapter 27 . 10/11/2010
I've been lurking through this story for the past two days (so much more interesting than my French homework) and may I just say that this is freaking AWESOME! Very convincing characterizations of everyone. Poor Lassie, being all stubborn and martyr-like. And Shawn, being an occasional pain, but a good-hearted one. The plot, with all its intricacies, was very well done. Props on making it all make sense in the end. The returning memory scenes were really great (and scary) too. My only minor criticism is that Vick seemed to accept Lassie’s guilt a little too easily and didn’t seem to do enough to prove (or disprove) it. But I am glad you didn’t make her one-dimensional and have her continue on her “Lassie’s guilty” kick the whole time.
| tiffaroolou chapter 27 . 8/6/2010
Fabulous story! Great plot-weaving and characterization! Awesome!
| Militant Delusionalist chapter 27 . 3/28/2010
I spent all day reading this. I was in absolute awe. The detail, imagination, creativity, and intelligence put into this story, AMAZED me! This is one of the best stories I've ever read, and I've read thousands. This would definately be in my top 5 fics of all time. Fantastically brilliant!
| Mahiri Chuma chapter 27 . 3/15/2010
Holy strawberries, Batman! So, I just spent the better half of two days reading through this entire story ... my eyes were live ravenous wolves, I couldn't stop! I must say, this has moved up to #1 on my list of all time favorite fictions in my 12 year history of reading. It was so complex and well written, the characters all wonderfully developed and written in character. What you did with the characters was just incredible and I wish i could see this as a whole season. You had my heart racing, my jaw dropping and me squealing in excitement - I never react this way when reading a fic!
I am so excited to see that there are even more stories for me to read. You have an incredible talent, one that I am quite envious of! You must publish a novel, I know I'd be a fan given your writing style and ability to weave a plot! Your writing is a good example of everything that is right with this site! Mille fois, thank-you! I will probably come back and read this over and over again so thank you for an amazing tale and for the whump, of course ... who doesn't love that?
Anyways, please keep on writing as you are a FF NET treasure, as silly as that sounds - I will always be a fan!
| stroopery chapter 27 . 12/5/2009
omg this stuff is fecking terrific! I read all 27 chapters in 2 days (my poor eyes!) and it was worth the lack of sleep 3.
I love the whumpage (there's just something about lassie!whumpage that got me much more than shawn!whumpage), I love the focus on the SBPD and shawn and henry's role and ordeal in this mess, i love the drama and the angst, and love the interaction between the characters. and when lassie found out that he matters, that they cared so deeply for him - gah 3.
I really enjoyed your fics i've read so far - here's hoping there'll be more to come (sprinkled with a good dose of lassie!whump too ;p ) :D!
| Teh.Juxtaposer chapter 27 . 11/28/2009
Wow... I really should be at the library researching for my history paper... but instead i spent a day reading your fic. And it was pretty damn good. I thought the ending was very satisfying and that the characters were very realistic, especially Lassie being all martyr-like.