Reviews for The Day I Die
Abbie8290 chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
This was so beautiful! I nearly cried at the end!
lulu chapter 1 . 5/21/2009
that was...a quick death...i felt dissapointed...for a last confession, it wasnt very emotional
Tomahawk 3.0 chapter 1 . 2/5/2009
sad. really sad, yet beautiful. I just wish you'd talk to me already.
Summer-san chapter 1 . 2/5/2009
aw to die in someone's arms! Thats beautiful!
LittleSparrowFlewAway chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
gah! Thats so sad and so sweet at the same time! kawii!
SparkSparta chapter 1 . 2/4/2009 sad. But good, really good!
Saba's Reflection chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
Aw! Sorry, I couldn't possibly come on today! NO SNOW DAY. My mum literally pushed me out into the cold... . Ugh. Lovely story! Better than how I would put it.
Safaia Bara chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
Aw! That was the perfect mixture of sweetness and sadness...very good. I think your writing keeps getting better and better.

Later Jazz-chan!
Tuliharja chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
Somewhat sweet, even little bit unrealistic. But still, really sweet.
Leigh-Leigh chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
Aw, it is sad, Retasu onee chan died, but I am glad she told her feeling to Pai before she left.

I also love the fact that the fish were like Retasu! Good work imouto-chan!