Reviews for The Adventures of Haruhi Uzumaki
celious2 chapter 23 . 5/5/2010
A great chapter with a lot of action. They're in the castle now which means fights in the next chapter :D Yay.
I really liked Maruya's little flashback at the beginning. It was so cute to picture Sakura with a baby Haruhi.
Shikakri will have another fight. I can't wait to see how you made him improve his skills. Great job. I can't wait for the next chapter :D
celious2 chapter 22 . 3/19/2010
Now this is getting really really interesting :D The fight was of course the main event of this chapter and you described it very well.

As I said before I love the idea of the whole " restoring the Uchiha clan" thing. Very exciting.

But i've to admit that what I liked the most in this chapter was the two Haruhi's flashbacks :D I mean, they're so sweet together and I really would like to see that kind of scene again.

Excellent chapter. I can't wait to see who this dark lord Uchiha is even if I've my idea. You put so many hints at the end but I just want to have the confirmation

Good job.
celious2 chapter 21 . 2/28/2010
Really nice :D The Uchiha mystery is getting deeper and deeper. I really can't wait to know the end of this and finally know who's in this castle.

It's true that this chapter is pretty calm compared to the others but I think it was necessary. A little break sometimes isn't bad.

Very nicely done Sean
TheDancingMarionette chapter 15 . 2/10/2010
haruhi got sakura's pathetic a weak fangirl with she's calling takai-kun over and over wonder sasuke called sakura good thing is she got kyubi chakra.
celious2 chapter 20 . 2/10/2010
That's a great chapter :D One more time sorry for not having read it sooner ; I just realized I really missed something.

Love how it goes so far and I can't wait to see the fight and of course, see if they'll bring him back. Maybe we'll learn a bit more about Sasuke too.

Hehe I really appreciated the funny scene when Shikari showed up and Haruhi just beated him like Sakura did the Naruto at teh beginning of Shippuden. Just reminds me good memories as well.

Good job
celious2 chapter 18 . 11/13/2009
Wow the end of this battle was epic :D I really enjoyed reading it. And it seems that the history repeats itself That's great. And I hope they're gonna bring him back this time. Good job ! Can't wait for the next one.
Dark Prime0 chapter 18 . 11/5/2009
i'm a bit disappointed...your basicly telling the cannon story with new chacters

it does have some nice twists here and there, but...nm i'll just be repeating the 1st sentance

it is done well, and i will still read, can't let a little someting like that ruin a good story, for me anyway
videogamer37 chapter 17 . 11/1/2009
cant wait to see wat naruto does about Haruhi's kyuubi state.
mch90 chapter 17 . 10/21/2009
Great chapter. Looks like Haruhi is more like her father than we thought.
celious chapter 17 . 10/20/2009
Very cool chapter. Sorry I'm very late

But anyway, I really enjoyed this. The battle is very well described and I wonder if Haruhi has the Kyuubi too.

Haha Takai has a twi sister ! Nice idea !
Star1X chapter 16 . 9/25/2009
Are you going to show more Narutoxsakura?

Also, no mention of Naruto being related to the Fourth? :)
celious2 chapter 16 . 9/25/2009
Haha finally this is the time to reveal Takai's real identity :D

And I really love the way you did it. Analysing his blood and chakra is a very good idea.

I wonder how Naruto is gonna handle and of course what is gonna happen with Haruhi right now.

As always, your style is awesome and very clear which is very good for someone who doesn't speak English every day. Nice job Sean
flame55 chapter 4 . 8/6/2009
this is okay
Gravenimage chapter 15 . 8/6/2009
Great chapter update soon.
Bombat1994 chapter 14 . 7/23/2009
nice i have missed so many chapters

keep the story going
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