Reviews for Tension
somethingjustlikethat chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
This is very angsty. Good job.
whitehound chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
Very well done (although it could do with a bit of proof-reading).

I don't believe in the idea that Lucius abuses Draco, because the first time we meet Draco he is talking about bullying his dad into buying him a broom, and he seems to genuinely love his father. But there are certainly hints in canon that there may have been a sexual relationship between Lucius and Severus - or at least that Sirius thinks there was!

What we see of Lucius in DH makes him seem less villainous - and therefore less likely to have been an outright abuser - than before. But even a consensual sexual relationship between those two while at school would still have to be at least borderline abusive, because of the great gap in age and power.
MinervaEvenstar chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
It was written well. I didn't like it because it doesn't suit my personal tastes, but I can admit that it was written well.