Reviews for Merciless: A Portrait Of A Rebel
MrReviewerGuy chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
Holy crap, she scares me, and Earth hasn't even been taken over yet! Great story, I love your Half Life stories!
Killerblonde chapter 1 . 4/6/2009

To be honest, I hadn't read what you have in bold at the top, but I did once I saw the name 'John Cole'. It sounds familiar...
X6Herbius chapter 1 . 2/10/2009
“Checkmate, motherf**ker.”


This is a really nice story. I can just imagine Jordan sprinting along the streets of City 17 with all of a national arsenal on her back. :P Your use of references really helps to bring the story to life. Dare I say you've written this better than my stuff...? I better get busy. ;)