|Reviews for Moaning Mytle's really great!|
| AdriftUponASeaOfTime chapter 1 . 12/18/2013
I must say, I agree with you. Those people really were stupid.
| Someone Random chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
write a sequel!
| zynaofthenight chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
| HPandBTRobsessed chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
this is really funny! well written too!
| seamus and me chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
this is really funny i luv it!
| kwylink chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
you know, this is basically AMAZING. in general. usually I don't like ships that aren't Harry/Ginny, but that's...wonderful rhymed. clever.
one thing. you might want to look at the spelling for Myrtle. you've got the y and r switched.
| Jane chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
Nice rhyming. The meter is not very consistent, but the poem itself is funny.
| Derek chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
hey man that was really good!
so funny and creative!
i have read some other pieces of yours, because I saw your comment on forbiddenfruitofEC.
i am kinda into twilight.
but i like your writings.
you must really like to travel.
and you cruise a lot.
and what you said about writers block is so true.
now i am rambling on unnecessarily
| sw448 chapter 1 . 3/31/2009
Some constructive critism.
I critisize everyone -including myself- so don't get all vindictive or anything.
The first thing you have to worry about when you're writing a couplet is DO NOT FORCE THE RHYMES. If you do, your poem sounds kinda hoakey.
'for as the bill went up so high' ? huh?
You're forcing that rhyme only so you can add that bit about pie.
When you're writing and you realize that you are forcing the rhymes, just delete those lines and rework them.
AND you forgot to add an apostrophe 's' at 'myrtle sake'.
I am the grammar queen. bow before me. I'm joking.
I bet you wish you never called yourself to my attention now don't you?
oh and don't forget to read my Hunger Games story tomorrow. PLEASE. (Cato's Story)
| chantel chapter 1 . 2/24/2009
that was funny NICE
| flourelle chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
HA HA! OMG! FUNNY!
| ForbiddenFruit107 chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
If only I had talent like that.
I mostly write in verse.
Which is sort of like
How I'm writing, right now.
There's no rhymes
And really no pattern.
It's just like writing normally,
Except it's an excuse to be a bit more dreamy
and a lot more fun!