|Reviews for The Past and the Present|
| hikora chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
Wow, OMG! This is just...just...just... I don't know what this just is! But I love it! It's so cute.
| Queen MiMi of Wonderland chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
Awesome story :)
| hgjasdf chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
Interesting use of past/present. Quite enjoyable.
| She.Drowned.In.Venom chapter 1 . 3/21/2012
I like it! Well done. Good premise.
| noname00 chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
That was so sweet though in a prev way lolxD
I loved it
| animechaser chapter 1 . 4/1/2010
Now this, not all chronological order, is mastering of order/time that order thingy.
(_) and hot!
| LovelySpiral chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
| Hiromi Not To Shabby chapter 1 . 12/13/2009
Aw This Story Is So Kawaii x3 I Love Older Naru And Younger Sasu *Dreamy Sigh* Your Really Good ]
This Is Soo In My Favourites 3
| Sesshysgirl06 chapter 1 . 9/24/2009
*nosebleed* I loved it! You should have more reviews than this!
| Imou chapter 1 . 9/4/2009
... interesting... *blushes*
| Rizember chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
are you sure that was your first lemon? I nearly choked...good job, mission accomplished. By the way, I want you to meet John (I am a psychic page break & I know what colour your undies are) LOL :)
Your story's really cool, I was laughing in the dark(powers gone) & now my family's talking bout an ASYLUM for some reason...
anywho, onto the next story
ps:I know I'm not a bad guy. Duh :)
| fox999 chapter 1 . 5/4/2009
brilliant! I loved though it was just a tad rushed I still love it!
| ThisArtWar chapter 1 . 2/10/2009
You should make this a full story! it is very good ) i enjoyed reading it very much, i liked the flashbackstuff a lot it was fun to read )
| moopad chapter 1 . 2/10/2009
(~woow slight shota) aren't they sweet?
this's reeally awesome, like your writing style, very creative to make kinda loop stolyline
| LawlietLover8 chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
Nice first lemon. Love your story